I Don't Have a Choice (But I Still Choose You) (Liz/Jack, L/Danny, 3/4)

Aug 31, 2010 22:33

Title: I Don't Have a Choice (But I Still Choose You)
Part: Three of Four
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairings: Danny/Liz, Jack/Liz, Jack/Other
Spoilers: through 'Black Light Attack!'
Word Count (this part): 2,623
Rating (this part): NC-17
Summary: Following Jack's wedding, Liz tries to distract herself. (Sequel to " I Wish I Were the One You're Looking For.")
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liz/danny, jack/liz, i don't have a choice, jack/ofc, 30 rock

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peoplewantducks September 1 2010, 02:54:51 UTC
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

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michellek September 1 2010, 03:03:12 UTC
THAT'S A LOT OF Gs.

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peoplewantducks September 4 2010, 09:21:50 UTC
it sure is. and you last post last month! I'm dying here

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michellek September 4 2010, 20:56:26 UTC
heeeeeeeeeey, this is far from the longest I've made people wait!

That isn't a good thing.

D'oh.

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frey_at_last September 1 2010, 03:07:27 UTC
Nnngh! So sad and now SO TENSE!

There are so many great little nuances, like the way Jack looks at Marina during their dinner, or Liz turning her back so Danny can't see her face while she's talking to Jack.

Damn, I wonder what Jack told Danny! What a lousy dude. (But I like him in this story because at least he's paying attention...)

If I have to wait three days again I might diiiiie! Just so you know. :)

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michellek September 2 2010, 07:12:02 UTC
Thank you!

I don't really Jack is being too much of a jerk, since it's the sort of thing that's really only hurtful in this context, and if Liz didn't feel anything for Jack, she wouldn't care that there was this extra dimension to the lie. (And I do like writing Jack as someone who notices/cares that Liz is obviously dealing with something. I like Jack this way!)

I'm afraid the post date for part four will be Saturday. But I might get it up sooner!

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peoplewantducks September 4 2010, 09:23:09 UTC
plz take some viagra so you can get it up sooner!

ps it's already almost not saturday anymore in australia :)

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michellek September 4 2010, 20:58:19 UTC
Where I am, it's Saturday for another seven hours, so I should get credit for sticking to my words.

Because it is up now. And without the aid of drugs!

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muic September 1 2010, 03:17:09 UTC
TWIST.

You are evil for stopping there. You are also awesome for stopping there.

Seriously your fics have been a rollercoaster of emotions recently. I like it even though the wait for the next chapter is killing me right now.

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michellek September 2 2010, 07:14:03 UTC
Sorry/thanks! :) The next part will be up on Saturday, most likely, which isn't that far away, at least (even if it's not right now).

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parisgal3 September 1 2010, 03:34:43 UTC
Cliffhanger!

A Jack that actually realizes when Liz is unhappy? Unheard of!

Please don't make us wait too long for the conclusion!

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michellek September 2 2010, 07:16:07 UTC
It is nice to write Jack as being somewhat interested in what's going on with Liz. I miss him!

The end will be up on Saturday. Which isn't very long, at least.

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mindymakru September 1 2010, 04:23:55 UTC
I read each installment of this fic dreading the moment it will suspend again. Loving it! Please happy ending! Please!

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michellek September 2 2010, 07:16:50 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you're liking it. The end will be up on Saturday.

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mindymakru September 3 2010, 02:21:54 UTC
This is too long. This is not toward :(

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michellek September 3 2010, 02:35:44 UTC
It's not that long! In my defense.

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