Do This, Do That, Do Everything (30 Rock, Jack/Liz)

[michellek]

Title: Do This, Do That, Do Everything
For: The Alphabet Meme
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Prompt: S is for Spanking. (For vanveenthe1st.)
Word Count: 2,672
Rating: NC-17
Notes: I have never written anything like this before; hopefully, it came out okay. Consider the prompt word a warning; if it offends you, skip this fic. Also, I can't believe the first

Comments

[muic]

Ok, wow.

WOW. I need a reread because I can't think of anything else other than 'HAWT' right now.

eta: because this deserves a better comment and like what frey_at_last said, I'm surprised by how much this D/S things suits Jack/Liz. I guess the boss-employee dynamic and Jack most probably knowing some top secret employee-motivation sex moves as part of his 6-sigma training really makes this convincing. But also I'm happy there's smut in the fandom again and Liz is getting some.

Ack and I forgot to mention that Jack's perspective on this would make a very interesting read/not-subtle-at-all-hint.

[michellek]

I think it works, too; it's not something I would have written on my own, without the prompt -- not that I'm against it, but I've never written about this before and probably wouldn't have considered exploring it otherwise because I am used to writing more vanilla sex -- but I do think there is sort of an idea that Jack would be more dominant during sex than Liz is, so it's not that jarring to take it a bit further. Which is probably why I jumped on this prompt first. (Also, because I wanted to write something smuttier. I have been having a poor time writing sex recently, so I'm glad I got over that and could bring you -- and others -- a bit of happiness via porn.)

I may write that, or at least more exploring this dynamic. And thank you! I'm glad you liked.

[frey_at_last]

Boo, still so few comments!

This is a really fun and interesting way for them to go in their relationship (I wonder how many ways I can find to say more than "this is hot"), and even though it's not a dynamic I pursue when it's, like, superimposed on other pairings I read, for Jack and Liz it really works, and I'm KIND OF surprised it hasn't been a bigger theme for fic in this fandom! I mean, it crops up, and some of yours have a shade of it (just because it grows out of their normal dynamic), but, yeah. Those were a couple of long sentences.

Nice job!

[michellek]

I thought this might not get a ton of comments right off the bat, but it's not doing so bad, feedback-wise, now.

Now that you mention it, I don't think many other pairings I read (currently) would really work in this dynamic, either. But it was fairly easy, though there was (slight) hesitance (and only slight because, I got to writing this pretty soon after getting the prompt) on my part because it is something I haven't written before, to imagine them having this sort of relationship. I think it's probably gone unexplored because the fandom is kind of small; the more people, the more chance there will be non-vanilla sex being written about.

Thanks! :)

(And, hey, I watched the first series of Spaced recently! I very much enjoyed it, and will watch the second season soon.)

[peoplewantducks]

Yeah. Be the boss, Liz

:D

[michellek]

:D

[vanveenthe1st]

Yay, that was my prompt! I'm ridiculously proud that it was the first to be answered. Also I'm very glad you didn't keep it short :D

It was great. I actually think that kind of dynamic suits J/L better that the kind where they're very romantic and cute and in love. (I mean I like the fics where they're secretly or not-so-secretly in love with each other but I find it less realistic.)
Anyway, that was hot, J&L are great, you're great, Alec Baldwin is great and all of this made me very happy.
Thank you!

[michellek]

As you should be. :) I'm very glad I got this prompt, really, because I've been having trouble writing smut and this got me out of the rut.

I do tend to enjoy reading/writing the Jack/Liz in love fics most, I think because I really got into the ship because of their friendship and Alec sometimes giving Tina adorableface looks. (Which he didn't do much last season, boo.) But, anyway, I do still enjoy them getting together in non-traditional ways, or having sex for non-love reasons, and this dynamic was very fun to write about. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Thank you!

[bowserbabe]

Porn... I've missed you so!

I think I'm probably too embarrassed to expound much on what here worked for me, but uh... lots of stuff here worked for me. >.>

Also I've been really lazy about commenting lately but I have been dilligently reading like always. I actually gasped outloud when I saw the email notification today...!

[michellek]

Ha, no problem. I'm glad lots of it worked for you. :) Also, I'm pleased I've gotten out of my porn rut (just in time for the porn battle!)

I actually gasped outloud when I saw the email notification today...!

:)