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30 Rock, Jack/Liz, In The Dark, Prompt #18. Before sunrise

Jun 20, 2010 01:51

Title: Call It Off
Author: michellek
Challenge: drabble123
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairings: Jack/Liz, Jack/Avery, Liz/Carol
Table: In The Dark
Prompt: #18. Before sunrise
Rating: PG
Word Count: 300
Summary: It turns out that Avery isn't pregnant. (Spoilers through 'I Do Do.')

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue.

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liz/carol, jack/liz, drabble123 (claim #6), 30 rock, jack/avery

Comments 15

jenncho June 20 2010, 06:05:35 UTC

LOL this is how badly I've distanced myself from the 30 Rock finale... It legit took me a good 15 mins to remember who "Carol" was. I just keep picturing the random "Carol" that appeared in BadFic Theatre a few months ago.

Back on topic:

I liked this. I like the idea of there being no baby and him talking to Liz about it. I miss them talking. :(

michellek June 20 2010, 06:19:18 UTC

Ha, I wouldn't be surprised if other people might have forgotten who Carol is. I think most of my flist is not rewatching that episode over and over. (I remember because I like Matt Damon, and if I could stand to watch that episode again right now, I'd probably include him in a more prominent role in a fic.)

Thanks! I miss them talking, too. Gah, why is this show being a jerk.

peoplewantducks June 20 2010, 07:50:14 UTC

I like that they're talking.

And that you feel ok enough to write!

michellek June 23 2010, 03:19:39 UTC

They better have nice friendly conversations next season or I will... be bummed out. That is not much of a threat! But I'm not going to give a bunch of people chins, so I won't pretend I'm going to.

:)

muic June 20 2010, 08:55:54 UTC

LOVED THIS. No baby + Jack at least in some sane direction + those last 2 lines = ♥

michellek June 23 2010, 03:19:57 UTC

Thanks! :D

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michellek June 23 2010, 03:20:33 UTC

Thanks. :)

frey_at_last June 21 2010, 02:55:50 UTC

I think this is the way I'd like the new season to go. (Even Carol - it'd be nice for once for Liz to have someone while Jack doesn't. Then he can pine for his own Floydster.)

It sucks that now it seems so in character for Liz to wait for Jack to say something mean, and not just Jack-like. BUT we have been over that!

michellek June 23 2010, 03:24:48 UTC

I would love for Jack's lovelife to finally fall apart while Liz is doing okay. I don't even feel mean for saying that!

Yeah, it very much sucks. Meh.