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michellek

Give and Take (Jack/Liz)

Mar 24, 2010 23:30

Title: Give and Take
For: ham_napkin
Prompt: one word: oral
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Rating: R
Word Count: 1,080
Summary: Five conversations Jack and Liz have had about... pleasuring each other.

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue.

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jack/liz, 30 rock

Comments 25

ubiquitousmixie March 25 2010, 04:02:15 UTC

delicious, as usual. i love the way you wrote this using only dialogue - you can clearly picture what they're doing (*fans self*) and picture their expressions as if you've written them. kudos to you!

and nice song choice!

michellek March 25 2010, 06:23:18 UTC

Thank you! When I first picked out this prompt I wasn't intending to go all dialogue, but that's how the initial section came out, and I figured I'd do with it (and let the reader imagine what was going on).

I'm glad you think so! I love that song.

Also, A+ icon.

samuraichikx March 25 2010, 04:13:20 UTC

Hahahahah! I don't know what is wrong with me, but them arguing is hysterical, particularly them arguing over sex.

More to the point, however, is that you combined Jack/Liz sexytimes and them becoming parents!! =D Love it love it love it!

michellek March 25 2010, 06:43:27 UTC

I think that means something is right with you! I love writing Jack and Liz arguing about sex. It's the awesomest type of banter.

Thank you! I'm glad you do. :D I liked writing a little bit of them becoming parents.

mindymakru March 25 2010, 05:50:10 UTC

Well, that wasn't hot.

No, it totally was. Amazing how you made talking about head so sweet too :)

michellek March 25 2010, 06:44:03 UTC

hee, thank you. :)

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michellek March 25 2010, 20:51:31 UTC

Thank you! :D

lz1982 March 25 2010, 18:26:42 UTC

Given that the story was dialogue only, I was going to write, "I'm impressed with how long this is," but realized I would be setting myself up for a TWSS.

michellek March 25 2010, 20:54:42 UTC

I actually accidentally set myself up for a TWSS today (though no one took the opportunity; perhaps I'm the only one who thinks like this). I said (re: a soda): "It exploded all over me, and now my hands are sticky."

Also, I believe this is the longest all dialogue fic I've written.

lz1982 March 25 2010, 21:31:13 UTC

LOL.

I used TWSS the other day in front of two of my aunts and my 13-year-old cousin. I can't remember what it was in reference to, but my aunts didn't react at all and my cousin said, "I think that went right over their heads."

michellek March 26 2010, 00:23:26 UTC

Hee.