When I Think About You (30 Rock, Jack/Liz)

Jun 19, 2008 01:57

Title: When I Think About You
Prompt: 100_situations #086. Languid
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Word Count: 656
Rating: R
Table: Number Two.
Summary: Jack proposes they do something that Liz is not comfortable with.

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue!

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visiblemarket June 19 2008, 06:33:43 UTC
What I both love and despair about in regards to your Liz: that's exactly my reaction to that kind of thing would be.

This was wonderful. Especially these lines:

Your hand is way more familiar with my lady stuff than mine is. So... Good for your hand," she concludes haltingly.

And...

He does that vague, all-purpose hand gesture which never, ever prepares her for what he's going to say next. "... arousing."

Because they're both just so them. Great job!

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michellek June 20 2008, 00:51:39 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

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zuzubailey76 June 19 2008, 07:21:36 UTC
One of my favorite things about Liz is that she's a sexually frightened know-it-all, and you captured it so perfectly!

I'm always so happy when you write a new Jack/Liz fic!

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michellek June 20 2008, 01:01:25 UTC
That's one of my favorite things about her, too, I must say. (Also: hee.) It's extremely fun to write.

Yay, I'm glad. :)

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forensicirulan June 19 2008, 09:16:37 UTC
Oh, did I just laugh out loud at "Are you opposed to being naked on a roof?". I think I did.

This was adoreable. And weird. Weirdoreable. Or something.

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michellek June 20 2008, 01:02:27 UTC
Hee. Thank you!

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roga June 19 2008, 12:08:01 UTC
So... Good for your hand.

*sporfle*

The way you write Liz's reactions to Jack in bed just does not stop being awesome.

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michellek June 20 2008, 01:02:56 UTC
:D Thank you.

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runawayblue June 19 2008, 13:05:21 UTC
Haha, that was excellent! And man, I love the dialogue - you're so good at that.

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michellek June 20 2008, 01:03:23 UTC
Thank you so much. :)

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