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michaelangelo24

The Deal: Chapter II

Mar 19, 2012 16:46

Title: The Deal: Chapter II

Pairings: Ian/Anthony, Anthony/Kalel, Ian/Melanie

Rating/Warnings: NC-17

Summary: Anthony and Ian make a deal to help each other out when they aren’t getting enough out of their relationships.

Author's Notes: N/A

Previous Chapters:

Chapter I - http://michaelangelo24.livejournal.com/13710.html

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fanfic, nc-17, smut, smosh, picture

Comments 54

lazah March 20 2012, 00:10:26 UTC

My god, this was yet again, great.
I love denying Anthony, and how he questions everything.
You build it up so well, it's so easy to believe, so realistic.
Can't wait for more.

michaelangelo24 March 20 2012, 00:18:13 UTC

Maybe it's so realistic because I stole Anthony's real captain's log. ;)

lazah March 20 2012, 00:32:30 UTC

Rofl, that has to be it!
Or at least, we could all assume that as the truth in our fantasy :3

michaelangelo24 March 20 2012, 00:51:22 UTC

If only most of these fics were true... preferably not the angst ones. :P

lunainlove March 20 2012, 00:18:21 UTC

HOLY FUCK. ASDDFFDSDFGHJK.
This has reduced me to all caps raging and swear words.
It just seems so... real. Like you set up a little camera or something. I love the way it's done diary... er, captains log style. Looking forward to the next part :3

michaelangelo24 March 20 2012, 00:20:46 UTC

I thought the diary format would be a nice touch. :)

gothic_shoujo March 20 2012, 00:23:58 UTC

*drool*
Hmmm. Ian seems to really know how to please another guy. I'm assuming that he really IS gay. (Or just gay for Anthony. xD) And, I agree, it's just like Anthony to over think and fuss about everything.

There's something sooo hot about Ian being Anthony's "sex slave". ;P

michaelangelo24 March 20 2012, 00:30:40 UTC

You'll have to wait to find out. :)

Lol, I prefer Anthony as Ian's sex slave, which fortunately mercurial_fan has provided us with. ;)

gothic_shoujo March 20 2012, 00:42:49 UTC

Aww. >_< *hates waiting*

Lol, yes! xD Oh well... Hopefully, one day, someone will write some dominating!Anthony. :3

michaelangelo24 March 20 2012, 00:52:36 UTC

Lol, I helped make top Anthony go out of fashion. It's funny because the more recent ideas in my head involve him as top. :P

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vespiquen8 March 20 2012, 00:33:46 UTC

Clouds are marching along, singing a song, just like they do. If the clouds were singing a song, I'd sing along, wouldn't you too?

michaelangelo24 March 20 2012, 00:52:55 UTC

What song are they singing?

vespiquen8 March 20 2012, 01:01:55 UTC

The Ballad Of Mona Lisa

michaelangelo24 March 20 2012, 01:15:50 UTC

I don't know that one. I'll just let the clouds sing on their own. :P

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9800andseagulls March 20 2012, 00:42:56 UTC

How amazing was this? I'll tell you.
FUCKING AMAZING TO THE MAX.
Jesus christ Michealangelo, Your absolutly astounding!

michaelangelo24 March 20 2012, 00:54:20 UTC

...
MichAEl, not MichEAl!
Okay, now that I have dealt with that pet peeve of mine, thanks for loving my story so much. :P

9800andseagulls March 20 2012, 01:03:22 UTC

Deepest apologies. That was so stupid of me. Your names on my url bar at the top. DUHHH! Its late I'm so brain dead!
Yeah your story is amazing and I'm still in awe at the way its on the diary paper! You know what would absolutely BLOW my mind?! If there were little ianthony doodles in it! Haha! :3

michaelangelo24 March 20 2012, 01:17:58 UTC

I'm used to it. It seems like everyone who isn't named Michael or who doesn't who someone with that name personally spells it that way. I've never understood why, since it doesn't sound or look right. Then again, I am biased.

I can guarantee that there will be no doodles. I can't draw at all. It would take me longer to draw an Ianthony doodle than to write the fic itself. :P

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