FIC: Inevitable 44: Blood Debt

[mhalachaiswords]

Inevitable Forty-Four: Blood Debt
by Mhalachai
Note: A total of 9,706 words. What do you think of that, huh? Enjoy! (And yes, this is the Christoff chapter)

Comments

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[stealthyshade]

Havnt read it yet, just wanted to go ahead and tell you I love you.
*hug*
*UBER BIG HUG!*
YAYZ!
I'ma go read it now.
BUT YAYZ!S!!!!!!

[whoyouinvent]

interesting twist, what with his human servant being a witch - and so young, too.
it was a surprisingly... uneventful... meeting between christoff et al, which only makes me nervous, because *something* has to happen, i mean, they can't just go on their merry way, can there? because that doesn't happen in anitaverse and it certainly never happens to harry.
i'm still looking forward to the reunion with the hogwarts gang, esp. lupin. i love remus, and i love remus in anitaverse, so i am definitely anticipating it.
good chapter though, you have a good mind for politics that i certainly never managed to develop myself.

[mhalachaiswords]

because *something* has to happen

Or maybe the mean author is trying to lull you into a sense of security, making you think this is a nice, peacful HP/AB crossover, until BAM things to go hell in a nice little handbasket.

Glad you liked it. The politics will continue and will be an integral part, later on :)

[mhalachaiswords]

O rly?

*g*

[watcher457]

oh, yes it is. Cristoff is a minor baddie. Moroven is much, much worse. I can see her teaming up with Voldemort and using him like a puppet to get her hands on harry for daring to accept cristoff's protection. hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, you know.

[thekams]

AAAHHH! You posted!!! *goes to read and will come back with more coherent review when done reading*

[thekams]

Omg, I loved it!! I think things went fairly smoothly, but something obviously has to go wrong between now and 11:00 in the morning when Harry heads to Hogwarts. I think it was wonderful that C's human servant is such a young (or would that be old?) witch.

Ohhhh...when Harry was lying in the bed thinking how he'd be leaving Jason and Anita...gah, it made me almost want to cry! And Jason being all take-charge guy made me happy. I love how he convinced them to get in the bed and get to sleep.

You're amazing, did you know that? <3 much lurve to you!

[mhalachaiswords]

but something obviously has to go wrong between now and 11:00 in the morning when Harry heads to Hogwarts.

Quite possibly. After all, Harry still has to go shopping for his school stuff, right? All alone... in Diagon Alley...

Elsa's old. 1600s old. Which has a purpose, too. It's not all just fun and games in London these days.

Jason's good at getting people naked and in bed with him. A useful life skill :)

[thekams]

Jason's good at getting people naked and in bed with him. A useful life skill Oh I agree!!

Shopping in Diagon Alley...mmm...personally, I think he should bring Anita and Jason (does he? I know, I know...no telling plot points =P) cause you know, that would just be exciting!!!

sZdxfilkjzd

[stealthyshade]

YAH! *UBER UBER UBER BIG COOKIE!*
Yayz for the parslemouth.
But, a few things...
"I thought we were going to go have Anita-- I mean, have Anita and Christoff met, then that was it."
It should be meet, I believe, not met
"Are friends people who don't eat you?" Harry murdered in Jason's ear as they followed Anita and Requiem.
Muttered... unless harry shrank and is killing people on jason...
mmm *dirty thoughts of harry and jason run through head* Hee hee hee.

Anita went up on her knees, eyes flashing. "Do you mean to tell me that Christoff did this all as one big Council-approved fuck-you to Moroven?"
Haha, Love it.
-Owen

Re: sZdxfilkjzd

[mhalachaiswords]

Mmm, cookie.

You know, I've made some big goofs with the spell-check, but that murdered/muttered one takes the cake. It's hilarious, the messes one can get into with that.