Fic, AKA justice being served
Greetings! Someone in here can't leave well enough alone and has written a sequel to missmonkeh's Bond-roleplaying fic posted not long ago. (No worries, I asked first whether I could. XD) I suppose it can stand alone as well, but there are references to the first fic throughout that will be missed if you haven't read it (which you should, 'cause it's awesome
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I don't even know where to start, thank you for this detailed comment! The fact that you have fave quotes from this boosts my morale, not gonna lie.
NOT RUDE, JUST DIDN'T WANT IT TO LOOK UNCALLED FOR, but on the other hand I know I'd be flattered if someone wrote a sequel to a fic of mine, so not sure why I had to point it out. XD
Haha, yes, I didn't see BB as exactly verbose at this point, not to mention having him act in the same style as Zero earlier would've been repetitive. This speaks truth; I have an image of him trying to watch a Bond movie for Zero's sake and falling asleep halfway through, or maybe ragequitting. xD
Glad the porn aspect/descriptions worked for you! It's not that I consciously try to either write it or not write it, more like I do whatever seems to fit the tone and usually the sex scenes can do with an R. For this fic, the original was already NC-17, so it was only logical to carry on similarly. And with this, I do agree >B)AND YES, glad you picked up on them actually breaking the game in the end. I ( ... )
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And it's a really good sequel too. I'm always impressed when I see NC-17 stuff written with skill - too many people focus on the physical aspect and neglect the thoughts and feelings and motivations, as if sex is a mechanical act. I love the undercurrent of breathlessness and desperation running beneath their actions, and the way they both try so hard to maintain some semblance of dignity. AND IT'S NICE TO SEE ZERO LOST FOR WORDS FOR A CHANGE.
tl;dr OMGIT'SAWESOME.
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Very glad this was to your liking! I haven't written anything above R-rated in a while though I guess some would classify my R as their NC-17, so it's good to hear that worked out. Considering the situation, I thought the main deal was "ZOMG GETTING TO TURN THE TABLES ON ZERO OF ALL PEOPLE" rather than the fact they're having sex, so I tried to look at it through BB's lens and the desperation was inevitable. XD And yeah, it's not so different from their previous game as they're still trying to outlast each other almost till the end. YOU KNOW IT'S SERIOUS WHEN ZERO CAN'T MAINTAIN SNAPPY CONVERSATION.
tl;dr THANKYOU! :D
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