FIC: Repeat to Fade, Part One

[lucia_tanaka]

Title: Repeat to Fade, Part One of Three
Pairing: Snake/Otacon, Snake/Mindscrew
Rating: Let's slap this with an R for disturbing themes and some sexual content.
Summary: Like a genetic memory etched into his being, he felt dread. A field of flowers and a weapon in his hand. A place like this could break him, like it had broken another man. The

Comments

[silver11016]

Head tipped back to speak to the artificial sky and artificial gods, "This flower theme is a little overwrought, isn't it?" He asked no one.

"You should see the source material. It's even worse," someone answered.

Oh wow I never thought that Snake and Otacon in Ohtori would work the way you just made it. And mmmm yes cracks in the fourth wall.

And I just love the way you depicted Snake's pain, the way he knew it wasn't real but felt unspeakably guilty anyway. I can't wait to see how it colors his perception of Otacon in the future, and the way the guilt will keep eating him up inside.

I want art of StudentCouncil!Snake and Otacon now.

[lucia_tanaka]

the Utena symbolism is apparently really obvious, heh.

You will get to see how it colors his perceptions, yep.

oh man, if I could draw. alas, I can't. D8

[daniela_lynx]

... Would you give me your blessing if I attempted to drew it?

[lucia_tanaka]

Absolutely. Especially if you maybe supply lineart because I like coloring things, derp.

[daniela_lynx]

A collab would be an absolutely wonderful thing, indeed, since I'm a n00b at digital coloring. 8D