Comments | mgs_slash: fic - Raiden/Gray Fox

athenemiranda in mgs_slash

fic - Raiden/Gray Fox

Apr 27, 2009 16:56

-Saph added this pairing tag just for my last post, so I may as well continue to abuse it.
-this is a direct continuation of the Raiden/Fox drabble, so forgive me if it starts abruptly.
-I think this is a Part 1 Of 2 but I don't know if or when I might add more to it, so I'm posting it as a stand-alone for now ( Read more... )

fanfic, mgs2, gray fox/raiden, pg-13, 2009

Comments 8

daniela_lynx April 27 2009, 21:26:03 UTC

This is wonderful. You've managed to write it in a way I can actually think it is canon and Kojima just never told us OwOb

Nice job on the characterizations. Raiden is spot on, and I could hear Gray Fox's voice.

athenemiranda April 28 2009, 18:46:59 UTC

Oh thanks! I'm not sure this Fox was IC, but I'm not sure if this Fox is Fox so that's alright. I'm glad to be reassured about Raiden though, as I've barely written him before and haven't touched MGS2 in years. :/

sarahofcroydon April 28 2009, 01:51:22 UTC

I loved this. :3 It had such a lovely pace, and I liked the mirroring of the game, too (walking between places to find the blood gone). Most of all though I love just how hard Raiden tries to escape his own thinking and how much he's bound by it at the same time... it's one of the thing that struck me most about his character, and you got it down pat. :3

athenemiranda April 28 2009, 18:48:03 UTC

tssch, isn't it fun trying to follow his crazy thoughts? I LOVE how you write Raiden, so, <333.

karose April 28 2009, 06:55:09 UTC

You typo'd and forgot the sex again.

*dodges bricks*

I do find it ever-so-lovely, though. In its way, acknowledging the gameverse in just the metatastic way Kojima would approve. \o/

athenemiranda April 28 2009, 18:45:03 UTC

\o/ lol OOC Fox is sappy and OOC POSSIBLY REALLY RAIDEN'S SUBCONSCIOUS best getout for OOC evar I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT.

And yes, yes, that - I swear I won't write another chapter unless it can have the word 'phallogos' in it. Is m/m/f even allowed on this comm? >>>

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athenemiranda April 29 2009, 20:01:28 UTC

Thanks ever so for such a sweet comment. <3

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athenemiranda April 29 2009, 20:03:06 UTC

Gray Fox & Solid Snake are my OTP. Raiden & Gray Fox are two-thirds of my m/m/f OT3. :D

I'll have to try to write more of this hurty thinking soon, but I think I need to go play MGS2 again first. >