Time Bomb VGMV - Crit Wanted

Oct 10, 2011 11:08

Medium: Music Video (VGMV)
Title: "Time Bomb"
Pairing: All canon (some BossxSorrow)
Rating: PG
Summary: Music video about The Boss to "Time Bomb" by Jessy Greene

Crit Level: 

I need some crit on this.  I'm a video editor by trade, but I still feel like a novice when it comes to music videos, and especially fast cutting.  I do these videos as editing practice and because I'm an effin' huge MGS fan.  This one just isn't doing it for me.  There are moments I really like, but overall, there's something completely wrong with it.  The worst part seems to be the fast cutting at the end.  I'd love some feedback because I want to re-do this video at some point in the near future.

Remember, as a video editor, I have access to pretty much any effects I need.  I tend not to use them in videos like this because they seem cheesy, but if you see a place that needs a (somehow non-cheesy) effect, let me know.

Thanks!

I can barely see through the cracks.  Light shines out my scars.

basis: metal gear solid 3, medium: screencaps and vidding, character: the boss, rating: pg

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