OKAY. I'M DEVELOPING THIS HABIT. I'M STILL READING YOUR STORY, BUT I'M GONNA LEAVE THIS COMMENTING WINDOW OPEN SO I WON'T FORGET. I'VE BEEN WANTING TO COMMENT ON A FEW THINGS BUT I ALWAYS FORGET CAUSE I'LL ALWAYS BE SO HAPPY WITH YOUR ENDING.
BRB, I'LL SCROLL UP AGAIN.
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OooOOoo, I wanna know what happened to that restaunrant dude's eye. *tries and snatch your manual script*
HAHAHA, naruto's hilarious. "Why, because he's cool and powerful"
And the group shika had to look after, their doggie mission, totally reminds me of konohamaru. *grins*
OMG, it's like you work for Masashi Kishimoto or something, your characters are so ON SPOT. *laughs*
Okay, imma read your second half.
There's only one problem and I think it might be 'cause you're kinda tired typing this out.
"Where once those three stood now three completely different people stood."
Yeah I guess you can figure why it sounds weird. HAHA. It's just a small thingy, but I just felt like mentioning it.
OMG, I read the second half. I feel sad. Tsunade is crying. ): You made the ANBU sound so friendly with Tsunade, I couldn't help smiling.
COOL. I WANNA KNOW WHO ARE THE RECRUITED KIDDIES. KIDDIESSS! I've never heard of the village in the snow or smth like that before. This is getting really interesting. And here I was, thinking that this story's just some romance story when this chapter popped up.
The plot thickens... (dumdum-evil-lulzy-music)
I am so totally impressed that you knew Ino's daddy and Ibiki can work together as interrogation officers. Many people over look individual skills like that. You're so freakin' cool.
ALRIGHT. THIRD HALF.
NARUTO GIGGLED. NOOOOOOOO! NARUTO GIGGLED. *kills myself*
Hmm, I have this weird feeling that naruto's spending all his cash on purpose... HAHA NARUTO'S SO CLUELESS. LEAVE THE COUPLE ALONE!
Awww naruto's sweet (i smiled when he was being an idiot bumping into the lightstands and all). And I think he's really busy this week. He has plans both in the afternoon and night. ._.
OMG. THEY'RE HAVING A ROMANTIC WALK HOME. *melts*
YESS!!! HE DOESN'T NEED TO TOUCH THE SMELLY HEADBAND ANYMORE! (i'm sorry, i know lots of people like sasuke)
HAHAHA HE WEARS A NIGHTCAP, HOW ADORABLE IS THAT.
Okay, sorry, I realised that I've been fanboy-ing through the entire commenting thing. d: But yeah I hope that I managed to get something down that actually makes sense. HAHAHA.
Oh yeah, and I really love how your chapters are always so long. It's like, such a joy reading long chapters cause y'know, it just is. *big smile*
NEXT CHAPTER! I think it'll be the last one for today.
To explain away the bad grammar, I am often at least a little drunk when I write (and post). I'm way too critical of myself when sober, and do most of my best writing will drunk, at least that's what my friend shane is always telling me. If you really want to know about Hakkai, you need to watch or read Saiyuki. I'm actually not that creative, all the extras and new characters have actually been taken from different anime and manga that I love. So far from Saiyuki, Rurouni Kenshin, Yu Yu Hakusho, Bleach, and Tenchi Muyo: GXP.
BRB, I'LL SCROLL UP AGAIN.
...
OooOOoo, I wanna know what happened to that restaunrant dude's eye. *tries and snatch your manual script*
HAHAHA, naruto's hilarious.
"Why, because he's cool and powerful"
And the group shika had to look after, their doggie mission, totally reminds me of konohamaru. *grins*
OMG, it's like you work for Masashi Kishimoto or something, your characters are so ON SPOT. *laughs*
Okay, imma read your second half.
There's only one problem and I think it might be 'cause you're kinda tired typing this out.
"Where once those three stood now three completely different people stood."
Yeah I guess you can figure why it sounds weird. HAHA. It's just a small thingy, but I just felt like mentioning it.
OMG, I read the second half. I feel sad. Tsunade is crying. ):
You made the ANBU sound so friendly with Tsunade, I couldn't help smiling.
COOL. I WANNA KNOW WHO ARE THE RECRUITED KIDDIES. KIDDIESSS!
I've never heard of the village in the snow or smth like that before. This is getting really interesting. And here I was, thinking that this story's just some romance story when this chapter popped up.
The plot thickens... (dumdum-evil-lulzy-music)
I am so totally impressed that you knew Ino's daddy and Ibiki can work together as interrogation officers. Many people over look individual skills like that. You're so freakin' cool.
ALRIGHT. THIRD HALF.
NARUTO GIGGLED. NOOOOOOOO! NARUTO GIGGLED. *kills myself*
Hmm, I have this weird feeling that naruto's spending all his cash on purpose...
HAHA NARUTO'S SO CLUELESS. LEAVE THE COUPLE ALONE!
Awww naruto's sweet (i smiled when he was being an idiot bumping into the lightstands and all). And I think he's really busy this week. He has plans both in the afternoon and night. ._.
OMG. THEY'RE HAVING A ROMANTIC WALK HOME. *melts*
YESS!!! HE DOESN'T NEED TO TOUCH THE SMELLY HEADBAND ANYMORE! (i'm sorry, i know lots of people like sasuke)
HAHAHA HE WEARS A NIGHTCAP, HOW ADORABLE IS THAT.
Okay, sorry, I realised that I've been fanboy-ing through the entire commenting thing. d:
But yeah I hope that I managed to get something down that actually makes sense. HAHAHA.
Oh yeah, and I really love how your chapters are always so long. It's like, such a joy reading long chapters cause y'know, it just is. *big smile*
NEXT CHAPTER! I think it'll be the last one for today.
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