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Oct 27, 2012 15:48

This is for Loxelyprince! I hope this satisfies your request...
Um, I apologize for not showing the picture prompts! I'm having a terrible time inserting pictures into LJ format!
The pictures were supposed to be (1) from Lisa's wonderful album, picture #224 ( Read more... )

2012 halloween challenge story

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spikesgirl58 October 27 2012, 22:38:50 UTC
What a fabulous story, but so, so sad in the end. Poor Napoleon... I wonder if he will try to seek out the 'new' Illya, just to make sure he's okay.

Thank you for a great treat!

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loxleyprince October 27 2012, 23:12:09 UTC
That would be yes.


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spikesgirl58 October 28 2012, 13:41:42 UTC
Yay!! And knowing Napoleon, he would find him, too!

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loxleyprince October 28 2012, 15:09:17 UTC
Indeed.


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selyndaep October 28 2012, 19:36:19 UTC
Thank you so much for your kind words!

Sad, though...? From the viewpoint of poor Napoleon having to face life without his partner--perhaps with a new partner, and all the while wondering if Illya's 'new' life has made him content; yes, sad and unsettling.

But... what if Illya (with the help of an eiditic memory) faces the painful physical and emotional trauma of the accidents, of losing his wife, of eventually going through whatever he has to go through all over again... to eventually meet up with his partner, just like before--like it was meant to be! (And with perhaps the foreknowledge of the weird Thrugh scientist, so he wouldn't have to go through the time machine anyway...?) Then, more of a happy ending!

It's up to the reader to decide...

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spikesgirl58 October 28 2012, 22:30:37 UTC
I always enjoy stories that make me think and wonder about what happens next. This was one of those! I'm still thinking about it...

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