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mulder200 August 17 2010, 04:02:41 UTC
Here's hoping they both found peace at the end.

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mf_luder_xf August 19 2010, 03:12:45 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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amor_remanet August 17 2010, 14:38:27 UTC
Oh, this was just… so, so perfect. Honestly, I didn't even really notice the presence of my DNWs while I was reading, up until the big one at the end, because the story and how you wrote it weaved everything together so well - the language was perfect, the scenes were amazing, I could practically hear the different characters saying their dialogue… and I just loved all of this. Castiel's pain, and anger, and the few moments of relief he has, and his progression to becoming more human, and Dean's pain, and the torturing, and how he hasn't lost his humanity, but is certain that he has - I got so choked up when he was comforting Stephanie with the kiss on the forehead like he gave Jo. And this is just a personal taste thing, but askdfjh, I love Chuck and you utilized him so well here.

and I think this comment is really messy and incoherent, but just… thank you so much for writing this. It was gorgeous, every word of it. ♥

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mf_luder_xf August 19 2010, 03:23:12 UTC
Ok, thank Chuck! *wipes brow* I was terribly worried, but the fic just kind of wrote itself and refused to let me have much input. So I'm glad that certain things didn't bother you, though I still apologize for the rather mean end.

And yay! I actually had the most fun writing Chuck in this so I'm very happy that it worked for you.

Anyway, thank you for the absolutely lovely comment and mainly, I'm just so happy to hear you enjoyed it. I'm a bit of a worrier with exchanges and then I was late and...I'm glad you didn't hate it.lol Thank YOU for the awesome prompt!

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uwalumni2 August 18 2010, 03:05:24 UTC
The pain Cas and Dean was feeling came through. Their love for one another was always there but they just didn't know how to show it as they were both just so broken and hurt. I am just happy at the end, they came together and they went out together...hoping for peace for one another..**whimper..tears..**

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mf_luder_xf August 19 2010, 03:13:39 UTC
I'm so glad the emotions came through for you. Thank you for reading!

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strangeandcharm August 18 2010, 11:18:10 UTC
I love "The End" fic and this is the perfect example of why - your Castiel was so in-character and his pain over Dean's actions was really visceral. And as miserable and depressing as it was, it still seemed beautiful. Thank you!

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mf_luder_xf August 19 2010, 03:17:36 UTC
Those are truly kind words coming from you (considering I love your Castiel)! Thank you so very much for reading. ♥

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888mph August 18 2010, 13:15:42 UTC
*deep breath*
Ok... I can go back to the land of the living after reading this. ♥

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mf_luder_xf August 19 2010, 03:14:15 UTC
Awww. Thank you for reading!

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