What do you people think of this... I know it's short, but so what

[mexicandave]

Dear Journal,

Before we lost
Somehow came back
Before the tide
Again would grow
If only it was so
These are the loneliest
Words I know

Before our dreams were golden
And then the black or grey
Before our dreams came true
Then we never had to say
If only it was so
These are the loneliest
Words I know

Mex