Property of Sanji 16

[meunda]

Zoro has a theory that the universe simply will not allow him to be happy, so he’s not entirely surprised when he’s sprawled happily on the beach enjoying the sun, sand and the sound of the sea that something has to come and ruin his mood.

Or two things to be precise.

Girls.

“Well, don’t you just look like Christmas morning, laid out all tempting

Comments

[narcisisticniny]

The smutty scene, unf. As I said before, you spoil me so for being able to read it before anyone else, but I thought I should write it here too! ^^ The desperation there was great, it was just so hot and shows how badly they want each other. And that Sanji, 'just a pink hue over blue.' he's not that under the influence, he just wanted some! lol I'm onto your game Sanji. XD

Oh, and Bonney and Perona are one of my favorite female characters, Perona calling Zoro cute was the best damn thing. Zoro was rightfully scared when she mentioned dressing him up. And Sanji being a teasing cousin with them was awesome, I love reading about him acting normal towards women for a change. :)

Ah, the morning when Zoro woke up and afraid of Sanji was heartbreaking. The emotions he went through were perfectly written, I think it was justified that he was pissed and scared of Sanji. His thoughts of killing him then coming to the realization that Sanji didn't hurt him was handled so well, and I think Zoro's inner thoughts about not being able to trust people easily was the saddest and greatest thing I have read. You do a wonderful job of touching on human emotion, it's always so raw and powerful, and just wow. :D You're one of the few authors that can make me go through a roller coaster of emotions.

I went through 'haha Perona's so funny' to 'Noooo! Sanji didn't hurt you Zoro!' to 'unf. need more smut.' You make me mental I tell you.