let's try that again 13

[meunda]

The wind whips fiercely around Sanji's face, flicking his hair against his skin painfully. He doesn't care about that, he never does, what he does care about is the man holding onto his arm. He stares at the golden skin, the unusual green hair, the dark eyes and the clever mouth. He knows the man's face by heart of course, he's seen him every night

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[uftaki]

Yay! He remembers! \o/ XD And they ARE in the OP world! :D (And very interesting take on how Sanji went to sea at such a young age.) And wow... Sanji can feel Zoro, now..? That could get... -painful- at times... but this morning bit was very cute and heartwarming. :3 But... Zoro doesn't remember Sanji? D: Hoo boy... Starting from square one, here... :/ At least it explains why Sanji and Zoro were constantly butting heads. ^.^; *lol* But that initial little worry, when Sanji realizes Zoro doesn't remember... up on the roof... was touching.

And then... Thriller Bark... and Zoro finally starts to remember... remembering the last life... and... whee! XD I can understand Sanji still being wary, though, and cautious. He doesn't know if this is truly for real, or not... and Zoro still has to heal. Zoro's apology for forgetting was sweet. X3 But aiya... "we're not going anywhere"? OUCH. Ironic foreshadowing, ahoy. *winces in sharp sympathy* It's going to be a loooooong two years. ;__; HOPEFULLY, when they finally reunite on Sabaody, they'll be able to FINALLY take advantage of some alone time, and finally be what they were meant to be to each other.

Another WONDERFULLY fantastic story! :3 And hey, if a scene isn't working, best to leave it. I think it works a little better this way, actually. It certainly plays up to Sanji's "luck", that 'nothing happened'. XD And OOOOOH...!!! New, huge, in-depth story upcoming? :D SO looking forward to that!