Comments | mettathron: Fic: Deep Blue Sea (Chapter Seven)

mettathron

Fic: Deep Blue Sea (Chapter Seven)

Jan 19, 2007 23:27

At long last... it's finished. The final chapter of Deep Blue Sea. (insert maniacal laughter). I've been working on this story for nigh on six months, if you count planning. And now it's finished. No keelhauling for me ( Read more... )

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Comments 23

elfen January 20 2007, 08:29:32 UTC

While I'm sad that this beautiful story has come to an end, it was a very satisfying ending. Wonderful, wonderful story you wove for us readers. Thank you so very much for both writing it and sharing it.

devlinnreiko January 20 2007, 08:34:25 UTC

Great job. I really really enjoyed it. It's such a wonderful read and the way its written leaves an impact. Great job.

ptps January 20 2007, 09:50:03 UTC

tdjdrykrtksxr It's finished dammit

I love, love, love the descriptions you used to write Luffy. And how you come up with so many uses of the Sea and applying them to the whole crew - and the way Arlong was taken rsfjsysr damn you and your writing, DAMN YOU. T___T bbbbbb

Also LOL for Sanji's peeling paint literally and Usopp, Usopp XDD And Nami owned really well. arghargetgjkdugkdr so awesome. AND ALSO, ZORO'S SWORDS. ZORO'S SWORDS. LOVE HATE AND VENGEANCE. ARGHAGRH WHY ARE YOU SO AWESOME, DAMMIT. AND LUFFY. RECRUITING ZORO IN THE MIDDLE OF BATTLE. NAMI HAGGLING SALARY ARHJARTDKXRTKDRT

and the whole bit about Sanji almost dying before he managed to Change back was just so... deep, ngh T__T b

DBS FOREVERRRRRRRRRRR ♥ ♥ ♥

geuna January 23 2007, 01:12:06 UTC

T_T I hate and love ending at the same time. All wonderful, beautiful things must come to an end sometime, and it's so wonderful when it's WELL. Wonderful job, my friend!

sakurazuka_jae January 23 2007, 08:49:19 UTC

Yay, the final part!!!

I've really enjoyed this series, and the wonderfully lyrical way you have written it is just a fantastic meld of fantasy and magic and it all fits together so well. And the moment when Sanji and the sea remembered, and the way the sea gave Zoro back his sword and two others in a way that showed she cared for him too (I'd kind of gotten the impression that the Undying were not as loved as the rest of the sea-people) was really nice. And yes, recruitment and happy ending and we're sailing for adventure! Woot!