circus outtakes

Jul 13, 2008 22:48


...I wasn't going to write the circus outtakes for Moving Forward next. In fact, I wasn't going to write circus outtakes AT ALL. Just goes to show what I know.

And how about that ch. 166, eh? I wonder how much I trust Hoshino sometimes. More than that, I wonder how much I trust CROSS. Talk about least reliable narrator ever. :D

In any case, thanks ( Read more... )

in the circus, dgm

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sakanagi July 14 2008, 10:01:12 UTC
I like this story. ^^ In particular, the idea of Lavi telling fortunes is hilarious (and yet appropriate!).

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metisket July 15 2008, 01:00:02 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! And I admit that I didn't come up with Lavi telling fortunes on my own. I had a conversation with my beta like this:

ket: But Lavi, what would Lavi do that's useful in a circus? I mean, he's athletic and all, but his superpower is really his Enormous Brain.
zephy: Clearly he would tell fortunes.
ket: ...OF COURSE HE WOULD. Genius! You are a genius!
zephy: Yes, yes, I am. I'm glad you recognize this.

:)

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pukjie July 14 2008, 17:19:36 UTC
I loled. This is awesome.

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metisket July 15 2008, 01:00:42 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked Moving Forward, too. *dances*

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zephy_magnum July 14 2008, 22:46:00 UTC
Despite having beta'd this (but while ago since I am the . . . well, at least faster beta) I love reading it again, because I really forgot most of it.

I love Kanda with knives - I can only imagine what would happen if there were a heckler in the audience :)

And Lavi with a mask hiding the smile while he tells the most outrageous thing he thinks he can get away with.

Makes for a good Monday!

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metisket July 15 2008, 01:04:33 UTC
Allen: Hecklers are not necessarily akuma.
Kanda: ...
Allen: In fact, they almost certainly aren't.
Kanda: ...
Allen: And if you kill everyone who annoys you, there will be NO ONE LEFT ALIVE ON EARTH.
Kanda: They were akuma. You're wrong. As usual.
Allen: AGH.

:D

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tsumetaitsubasa July 15 2008, 02:30:21 UTC
Lovely and enjoyable fic. Love the sweet moments between Allen and Mana as well as Kanda's beginning attempts at juggling. Ha. Can't forget Lenalee and Lavi! They sounded amazing.

Amazing fic!

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metisket July 15 2008, 18:02:27 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Allen and Mana was surprisingly fun to write. Not as much fun as Kanda juggling, though. Kanda, he is so endearingly ridiculous. :)

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o hai thar lizziesilver July 15 2008, 05:11:32 UTC
You wrote fic. And you know what else?

...

I FINISHED MY GODDAMN ESSAY, AHAHAH, OMG. *runs in circles*

Also I read your fic, and despite not knowing the story or the characters AT ALL (you blathering about how perfect and wonderful they are does not count, no it doesn't), it was still so adorable. ^_^

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Re: o hai thar metisket July 15 2008, 18:07:28 UTC
Congratulations on your goddamn essay! I...I was starting to have doubts that you would ever finish that. Tiny, tiny doubts, you understand. But doubts.

You liked the fic? Reeeeeeaaally?

(see how perfect and wonderful they are? see see? go! go buy the dgm! you know you want to you're done with your essay come ooonnnnnn.)

:D

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