steady now

[metisket]

Weird things happen during times of academic stress. WEIRD THINGS LIKE THIS FIC. (Thanks, JLPT. You remind me why I hated school.) Anyway, thank God that's over. HI INTERNETS, I MISSED YOU.

So, yes. MOAR PANDORA HEARTS. I promise I remember there are other fandoms out there. I'm even working on fic for, like...*counts*...five of them. Haha. Yeek. *

Comments

[zetyr]

Well. Um, hello. I've been reading your fic for ages, but I always seem to arrive rather late and then I feel embarrassed about commenting.

But! This time that is not the case, so I'm finally going to tell you what I've been thinking for far too long.

YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER. I mean it, you are consistently my favorite writer for whatever fandom you write for. D. Gray Man, in particular. I honestly can't read any other fic besides yours because they all seem so shallow, in both plot and character interpretation.

Characterization is one of my favorite things in the world, and most definitely my favorite thing in writing. And you never ever disappoint. I simply adore the way you write characters, how you convey that subtle insanity that is just beneath the surface

[metisket]

XD Hello! *waves*

Actually, late comments make me really happy! So if you are ever moved to leave a comment months--years!--after the fic was posted, THAT IS A-OKAY. XD

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! Because, yeah, I never do write sex scenes. Or, well, apparently I only write them when I'm studying for a test that I think I'm going to fail. No idea what that means; probably don't want to know. :D

Oz is especially satisfying to write, because he is SO MESSED UP, and yet so fruitlessly determined to make himself not messed up by sheer force of will...totally my favorite kind of character.

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! ♥! And hopefully I'll finish up some DGM relatively soon...jeez, I've been tinkering with some of these things for MONTHS. ^_^;

[rinhail]

It makes all the difference when characters are in character. I love how wicked Oz is and how down-right frightened Gilbert is of Oz. Perfect!

And your writing is absolutely wonderful. :)

[metisket]

Thank you so much! :D I'm really glad you liked the characterization!

Oz is pretty freaking scary sometimes. Lucky for him, Gil has no sense of self-preservation. *shakes head at them* XD

[azalee_calypso]

*incoherent*
Your Oz. HAVE I SAID I LOVE YOUR OZ. So matter of fact about the whole thing and and. And fffffffffffff you manage to perfectly word Gil's sexiness and multiply it thousandfolds. The sex scene completely has that "beautiful mess" quality, meaning the only other way I can word it unnnnnggghhh♥♥

(Meanwhile I'll admit it was juuust a bit disturbing to have Oz constantly think about Alice while in the middle of seducing Gilbert, but, haha, at the same time it's perfectly believable (and makes for some gems like the biting VS licking paragraph~ ♥))

ALSO
Break saying “I think we’ve asked quite enough of Gilbert” makes my day for some utterly senseless reason.

♥♥

[metisket]

:D :D :D *loves Oz to distraction*

I am so, so relieved you liked this one. "Out of my depth" does not even cover what I was feeling writing this. XD

Haha! There was actually a lot of disturbing to go around. But! Hopefully a lot of cute? Also, if Oz had found Alice first, he'd have been thinking about Gil the whole time, so that makes it...fair. Or something. ^_^

Ch. 55 just reminded me how strange and interesting Break and Gil's relationship is. I don't really understand it. Then again, neither does Break, so that's a comfort. XD

Thank you so much for the comment! ♥♥♥

[ravelqueen]

argh i'm gone for a few weeks and you have already written so much!...ehm I will try to comment on everything? in backwards order, so here goes:^^

HAHAHAHAHAHHA who are you and what have you done with metisket? actual real pairing! with sex! but you are right the crazy is unmistakable

Oz! why so crazy! but ohh we love you (and gil loves you too no worries) this kid breaks my heart I tell you

[metisket]

This is the done-with-crazy!Ed writing extravaganza!!! ...Also I was meant to be studying, so obviously I wrote a ton of fic. Procrastinators unite tomorrow?

Lulz, I KNOW, RIGHT? Thinking back on it, I was reading someone's rant about how hard it is to have porn in a story without it hijacking the whole story, or at least drastically changing the tone. And this is absolutely true. Apparently I took it as a challenge. So this was...my attempt to write porn that was only sort of about porn. ffffff no idea whether or not that worked. XD

I'm so glad you liked my Gil! I was trying to channel Oz, who likes Gil far more than I do. Not that I don't like Gil! But Oz needs him in order to breathe. *tried to do this justice*

55 was an EXCELLENT Gil chapter. <3 Hahaha, PREDICT THIS, Vincent! "I'm his left eye," omg omg omg. And yes. It is a really good thing for Gil to love more than one person. For everyone, really. Although it's quintessentially Gil to have settled on Break, who's undoubtedly going to die in 3...2

[ravelqueen]

In my case procrastinator unite next year, sigh...at least you do productive and nice things in your procrastination like writing...I just read and start to watch hilariously gay shows like the new Hawaii-Five-0(which is a crime drama with the most married working partners I have ever seen) or stardriver (whose main hero is called the "galactic pretty boy" complete with sailor moon-esque henka scenes)

I'm still kind of hoping for Break even though his chances are even worse, cause he is like the mentor character(though very twisted), but I mean it would be horrible...I don't even want to know what Gil would do....just imagine its vincents fault and then Gil says I hate you forever = apocalypse? XD

ohh OZ WHY SO TWISTED? I love that he doesn't want to show this side to Gil at all....fits nicely with you fic btw...I mean the whole trying to give at least Gil the impression of wholesomeness, sweet and yet so depressing

[metisket]

Yes, that whole not wanting to show Gil the twisted side--and then there's Gil, who's like, "But if he isn't twisted anymore, what the hell do we have in common?" *headdesk* BOTH OF THEM. *shakes*

I would like a big rock to fall on Vincent before he has a chance to do anything bad to Break. I know that would make Gil sad, in an odd sort of way, but it would make Break extremely happy. And I have more in common with Break than I do with Gil. XD A hilariously ironic death! A ludicrously random death! COME ON, WACKY AUTHOR, I BELIEVE IN YOUUUU.

Unfortunately, Vincent is one of those cockroach characters. Siiiiigh. Every time I see him, it's like, "Are you still alive? WHY?" I think the last fictional character I hated this much was Scarlett O'Hara. Congratulations, Vincent Nightray.

Haha! I hear good things about this new Hawaii Five-0. Mainly that it is ridiculous and glorious. XD Enjoy!

[questofdreams]

How do I love your Oz? Let me count the ways *____*

I don't know why, with all the ways Oz breaks my heart, it's always Gil that does me in lol. Oh Gil ♥

I never have anything constructive to say so I'll just stick with my standard jibberish: a;osiejfisle LOVE LOVE LOVE

[metisket]

Oh, Oz. <3 <3 <3 THAT KID.

But I'm really happy you liked Gil! I'm less confident with Gil, so it's a relief you liked him--especially since he's your favorite. YAY!

Thank you very much! :D ♥♥♥