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[metisket]

...Katekyo Hitman Reborn! fic. OF ALL RANDOM THINGS.

This fic is evidence of at least four broken New Year's resolutions, and hey, it's not even the end of January. Rock.

One of those resolutions was "Don't start any new fic before finishing the next part of crazy!Ed." You see how that didn't work. I am so, so close to the end of the next part of

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[ravelqueen]

you can't believe how much I love you for jumping on the reborn! wagon!!
(even enough to forgive you about how long you are taking with crazy!ed...you said you are already proofing, so i thought maybe a few days...I'm falling off the edge of my seat at this rate)

and that was just wonderful, especially how you got Tsuna to be so involved and pivotal (oh god, cotton woll...thats exactly right), cause 1. he is my favourite character and 2. all Gokudera/Yamamoto stories that don't at least feature him don't do a good job of characterization, cause....come on its gokudera ^^

anyway I really liked it (and I normally don't really read non-tsuna fics....the things I do to get to read your writing...^^) wonderful idea, wonderful characterization....

so any chances of a tsuna fic in the future? (lol)

(small note on the side: have you read the new soul eater chapter? Soul has fans! Real affectionate Fans! HOW CAN YOU NOT BE WRITING SOMETHING ABOUT IT?^o^)

[metisket]

OH, you are not the only one. At the beginning of January, I thought I had like a week left before I finished crazy!Ed. I was wrong, terribly wrong.

There's this gap in the story, see. It needs to be filled. I have NO IDEA what to fill it with. It's a problem. But this will get done, I solemnly swear...possibly in a couple of weeks? Heh. Optimism.

I don't know if it's a comfort or not, but this section is really, really long. Really long. Another 3-parter, for sure. *sigh*

I'm so glad you liked the fic! :D Yay! I love Tsuna, too. I love...a very distressing number of the characters. I'll probably write Tsuna someday. If I ever have a day when I feel like I can channel awesome, I'll write Bianchi. And Hibari, that will happen. Dino, probably. Kyoko's friend Hana, maybe.

Heh. Bandwagons, they're awful.

Soul has a creepy stalker fangirl! It's going to be the funniest thing everAlthough someone pointed out that it would be even funnier if that girl were actually stalking Maka instead of Soul, and that is so, so true. I guess it was

[yamamotokun80]

hahahaha....
really good...
somewhat confusing at the start but once you get it.... you'll see it's good...

[metisket]

Thank you so much!

Sorry it was confusing at the beginning. o_O But I'm glad you enjoyed it overall!

[questofdreams]

The Boss gets a sort of hunted look if you go on about the family too long

LMAO oh Tsuna XD

Gokudera thinking in terms of graphs and percentages alifjseilke There were so many little tidbits of thought that made me go 'YES YES YES!' and I promise that isn't as inappropriate as it sounds lol.

He’s kind of proud of himself for confusing Reborn. and Oh, banished. Haha, burn. and silefjsie HAHAHAHAH OMG YAMAMOTO

This was adorable and hilarious and kind of sad, but I don't suppose it'd be a fic by you if it wasn't a little bit sad ♥

Tsuna was BRILLIANT. He was a blend of the 14 yr old Tsuna and TYL Tsuna and that in itself is kind of depressing for what Tsuna has been forced to become, but it also makes me so incredibly proud of him ;__;

I think I would sing your name from the rooftops if you ever wrote Hibari fic *___*

[metisket]

I'm so glad you liked Tsuna! I may write Tsuna fic, too. So much change over such a short time, and...as you say, I'm not even sure whether to be sad for him or not. Growing up is never fun; I suppose it's nice if you're bullied into growing up kickass. Although less nice if this means that people will be trying to kill you and everyone you love all the time from here on out.

Yamamoto, AH HA HA, he was my initial favorite. (The further along I go, the harder it is to peg a favorite). He's just so calm, you know he has to be deeply, deeply crazy. XD

Gokudera, so much love. Because he's a science geek and a math geek and an explosives geek, he's probably a lapsed Catholic, he's got all kinds of family issues, and then there's always the whole mafia thing.

He reminds me of my Jewish, rap-appreciating, basketball-obsessed housemate who's getting a PhD in psychology and spends every summer in China. Sort of an "I don't get you at all, BUT YOU'RE AWESOME." XD

I don't suppose it'd be a fic by you if it wasn't a little bit sad. ...Yeah,

[questofdreams]

Yamamoto was my favorite at first too, but then, my favorite kind of changes by week >_>;;;;; Although I think I might love Tsuna most now just b/c he's Boss lol.

Jewish, rap-appreciating, basketball-obsessed housemate who's getting a PhD in psychology and spends every summer in China.

I DON'T GET IT AT ALL, BUT THAT'S AWESOME XD

And the fic is only a little sad! That's something, surely XD And anyway, I love a little sadness with my fic reading so that's okay.

And that Hibari fic, it will happen. Imp of the Perverse. :)

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[melissa_42]

Excellent characterization! I especially liked Gokudera's thought processes--exactly how he talks in my head XD

[metisket]

I'm happy you enjoyed Gokudera! He was fun to write, too. :D

Thank you for the comment!

[azartti]

Wow, I love it. Gokudera's thought process is great! And to tell the truth, Yamamoto is my favorite, second to Tsuna. And you made them both so well, specially Tsuna.

I can't put in order my thoughts but the point is you made go aiusdhfasdfjas♥

[metisket]

Thank you very much! :D

I'm really happy you liked Tsuna; I was worried about getting this in-between stage right--no longer a spaz, not yet completely kickass. Really glad it worked!

Thanks again. ^_^