some people shouldn't be allowed to get bored

May 18, 2009 12:20


This is that Chaos verse fic that was supposed to be Al/Hawkeye. And it is Al/Hawkeye. It's just that it's mostly Rebecca?

...She cracks me up, what can I say. ^_^

FMA does not belong to me.

cradle robbing )

fma, chaos verse

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paopaotang May 19 2009, 00:40:27 UTC
I loved this so much. Great job.

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metisket May 19 2009, 16:40:31 UTC
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it. :D

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eiliem May 19 2009, 00:49:05 UTC
AAAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAHA

This is brilliant.

And hilarious!

And brilliant!!

ROTFL!!!!

"Mr. Miracles" Oh God that is perfect. XXDDDD

Awww, Ed's reaction to finding out about them....Apparently it was the right thing to say, because suddenly Miracles was freaking beaming at her. “Well, he is awesome,” Miracles said. D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ;_;

Riza totally set Rebecca up with Paninya, didn't she

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metisket May 19 2009, 17:00:00 UTC
*grins* I'm happy you liked it!

Ed, he would be such an overprotective maniac to have as a brother. And yet adorable!

And I do believe that he and Rebecca would drive each other crazy.

MWA HA HA. So much for mellowing her out. More explosions!

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kjb25946 May 19 2009, 03:12:16 UTC
...I nearly CRIED when I saw a story from you.....CRIED I TELL YOU!!!!!!
And you wanna know what I did after seeing this? I read this one, and then I went back, and read every other chaos verse story you have.. WHY? Because you are a fanfiction GOD. Thats why...I love your stories so DAMN much...

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metisket May 19 2009, 17:03:31 UTC
:D :D :D

Thank you so much! I'm happy the Chaos verse makes you happy! Because God knows it's out of control. ^_^

*dances around*

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ca11iope May 19 2009, 03:26:34 UTC
Hahahahaha!!! That was great! I love Rebecca's POV. You're so good at keeping everyone IC too. Thanks for the laughs - I needed something good to read tonight.

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metisket May 19 2009, 17:10:46 UTC
I'm happy you liked her POV! I was hoping not to mess her up, because canon Rebecca is HILARIOUS. I was rereading Rebecca scenes for this, GOD I love her. And I love that she's friends with Hawkeye, because, really, that says nothing but good things about Hawkeye. *glee*

Thank you so much for the comment!

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piss_and_ink May 19 2009, 03:27:54 UTC
Ok, ok. Here's what I love: You write comedy of life as it is normally. So many people write to be funny and play up all these stupid things that are completely ooc and irrelevant, and makes for a story that you don't really care about. This is the total opposite, and you do this BRILLIANTLY. Brilliant, seriously. I was laughing out loud in too many places worth mentioning. Except I might mention a few. But I just love how you learn that Riza is a WEIRDO, because that's who she is, and she and Al really are perfect for each other in that way. The recurring litany of woe is amazing and hilarious in that Rebecca can't just let it go ( ... )

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metisket May 19 2009, 17:45:10 UTC
^_^ Real life is pretty damn funny. Especially if it involves FMA characters; you can basically just stick them in the same room and watch as they are hilarious. *loves them*

Yay Hawkeye! Also, Roy, one of the most charming things about him is the way he surrounds himself with people who aren't deferential AT ALL. :D

...Now. What do you want me to write with Al?

I'm really happy you liked it! Thanks so much for the comment. :D

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piss_and_ink May 19 2009, 18:40:41 UTC
Sorry, I'm unclear. I just mean how he was worried about that next item on his litany of woe, about dealing with sensory overload and RIZA OVERLOAD. like, Al is so freaking adorable. Stuff that we wouldn't get from a Rebecca POV. ;)

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metisket May 19 2009, 19:02:45 UTC
Oh, I see. Al POV...it could happen. You're right, he is freaking adorable. :D That could be fun. I will think on it!

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