Supernatural fic: Time’s Turned Glass

[metamorphagi]

Title: Time’s Turned Glass
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3,461
Summary: All your life, you’ve had one job, one purpose: Take care of Sammy. It’s only when he bails (no, when you lose him) that you realize the truth-taking care of Sammy isn’t your job, your purpose. It’s your life. It’s all you are.
Author’s Notes: Written for

Comments

[tehjessica]

Wow, that's amazing! Very good. There's just so much more to all of that than Dean let Sam know. I think your fic is very plausable. :)

[metamorphagi]

Thank you!!

[etrix]

That was such a powerfully achy scene and you've done the backstory the same way. Good job.

[metamorphagi]

Thank you very much!

[amichevole]

This was ridiculously awesome. And I *still* don't have a SPN icon. Okay, scratch that. I have my Dean and Emily icon, but that doesn't really count.

Seriously, though. Perfect characterisation, perfect setting, perfect everything. Much love.

[metamorphagi]

Thanks so much!!! Though you really should get on that. The boys are remarkably photogenic. *pokes icon*

[kalliel]

Okay, so first of all, second-person is like, my #1 kink; your use of it here is gorgeous. Add that to the reverse-chronological order and it's kind of like my dream come true, architecture-wise. But what's really lovely about this fic is Dean's perspective on the incident, all the individual scenes that really give readers a sense of what was going through Dean's head during the Flagstaff incident.

And this line: Still, one day you joke, “What’s the deal, Sammy? Planning your escape?”

Is perfect. Thank you for writing this!

[metamorphagi]

Well I'm glad I didn't let your #1 kink down! I have to say, it was a pretty interesting point of view from which to write; I'm kind of excited to perhaps attempt it again.

And thank you so, so much for your amazing compliments! They mean a lot. :D

[sequence_fairy]

This is wonderful. I was completely hooked from the moment I started!

[metamorphagi]

Thank you!