Comments | metamorphagi: Supernatural fic: In the Dark

metamorphagi

Supernatural fic: In the Dark

May 11, 2010 18:22

Title: In the Dark
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Rating: PG
Word Count: 4,019
Summary: Jessica is well aware Sam’s got some stuff to work through. But it still hurts when she knows, she knows, and he still won’t tell her.

( Even though he didn’t exactly share his life story, with the things he did divulge, Jessica realized one thing by the end of the night: She was done for. )

pairing: sam/jessica, rating: pg, fandom: supernatural, character: dean winchester, fic: in the dark, fic, character: sam winchester, genre: drama, character: jessica moore

Comments 14

borgmama1of5 May 12 2010, 04:13:03 UTC

This is an interesting alternate story. I really liked this Jess.

metamorphagi May 12 2010, 05:32:49 UTC

Thank you!

candycanerica May 12 2010, 06:53:04 UTC

Wow. That was great. Fresh perspective, and it really worked. Good job!

metamorphagi May 12 2010, 07:07:12 UTC

Thanks very much!

surevesta May 12 2010, 07:07:48 UTC

This was wonderful! I really enjoyed how you wrote Jess and her perspective on life and Sam. Great job... (I really liked that you made her an Anthro major! :D )

metamorphagi May 12 2010, 07:20:33 UTC

Thank you! It's been in the works for a while, just because I didn't think that Jess's voice was right, but finals procrastination is a remarkable motivator.

I like Anthro myself, and I figured it was an easy enough way to have her study behavior without getting into Social Psych territory, so. Are you an Anthro major by chance?

surevesta May 12 2010, 07:31:21 UTC

It's my second major, my actual degree is in History (although I'm hoping, depending on the job I get, I hope to eventually finish Anthro as a second degree through distance learning). :)

I think it was a good choice! And yes, finals procrastination is amazing, isn't it? ;) I finished my "last" set last week. Now it is time for the big wide world >.< And the search for employment -_-

metamorphagi May 12 2010, 07:50:37 UTC

Oh, very cool! I could never hack History. I'm going the international law route. French major right now, but I'm transferring colleges this next year, so am going to switch to International Relations instead.

It is quite amazing. Even more successful when your friend enables you and you both look up shirtless hockey player pictures. (Of which there are remarkably few, I'm sad to say.)

Good luck on the employment! Now really sucks. But I'm sure you'll do wonderfully. =D

writingpathways May 12 2010, 14:57:14 UTC

Great story, Jessica's POV seemed real and true to what could have happened.

metamorphagi May 12 2010, 17:31:07 UTC

Thank you!

hawk50 May 13 2010, 02:36:12 UTC

Oh. This one hurt.
This Jess was a class act. I liked how she never asked; I liked how she researched; I liked how she *knew*. The last three paragraphs killed me. I adored this. Thanks for sharing.

metamorphagi May 13 2010, 04:31:24 UTC

Thanks very much. That's exactly what I was going for, so I'm glad it came through, and I'm glad you liked it. In my mind, Jess could've been a total badass herself if she hadn't, you know, died. But anyway. Thanks again.