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The Balance

Jul 19, 2007 20:14

Title: The Balance
Author: bratanimus
Summary: Her legs felt like tree trunks. Her toes were gnarled roots, not meant for walking, not meant for carrying her somewhere where things would end rather than begin. My take on one of the final scenes of Deathly Hallows. Remus/Tonks, Harry/Ginny, Neville/Luna, Ron/Hermione.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Talk of death
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bratanimus August 13 2007, 11:26:58 UTC

I'm so happy that you liked this! It's odd how I'm still discovering which genres I can actually write (i.e., the "pacey" action/adventure, or suspense, or whatever this is! ;)). I had no idea that was actually the genre that came out, lol!

Glad you liked the opening; it was going to be a drabble, but then it sort of took off from there. ;) I certainly could see Tonks as a "glorious warrior woman," as you called her; I think she's more than capable of leading part of a battle and strategizing on the fly if she needs to.

I'm especially pleased that you liked the ideas that I threw in here. Snape's Patronus change was an idea I came up with that I had secretly hoped would come into play in DH. ;)

and Harry being the incapacitated one throughout is a great idea, as he gets far too much of the glory in these things. ;)

Exactly. ;)

I'm pleased that you liked all the concurrent adventures (wish DH had been more that way ... but then it would have been twice as long, lol). And very glad you liked the R/T reunion. :)

Thank you again for such thoughtful comments! :D

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