Title: The Balance
Author:
bratanimusSummary: Her legs felt like tree trunks. Her toes were gnarled roots, not meant for walking, not meant for carrying her somewhere where things would end rather than begin. My take on one of the final scenes of Deathly Hallows. Remus/Tonks, Harry/Ginny, Neville/Luna, Ron/Hermione.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Talk of death
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I'm so pleased that you think I have a knack for suspense! Isn't it funny how sometimes we don't know what genres we're good at (or even what we've actually written, lol)? The opening scene, with Tonks focused on just walking, was actually intended to be a drabble, because I had no idea I'd be able to finish this in time. But then the piece sort of took off without me. :)
Glad you liked the idea for Snape's Patronus, and yes, he WOULD hate that, wouldn't he? I had hoped that we'd get to see Snape's Patronus in DH, and I got my wish, didn't I? :D
I'm happy that you liked the Order and the DA being integral in Voldemort's defeat. It would have been nice to have seen more of that in DH, eh? Ah, well. ;)
Glad you liked the "Never again" bit. I'd wanted a scene where all his defences were down and he had no choice but to cover her in kisses, since up til now he'd been ((in the books at least) a pillar of restraint. ;)
Thank you again, and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my take on things! :D
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