Part Six: The Perfect Day

Jun 26, 2007 18:33

Title: The Perfect Day
Author: gijane7702
Rating & Warnings: PG/angst
Prompts: Promise (it's there...)
Word Count: 1751
Summary: A perfect day…right before all hell breaks loose.
Author’s Notes: Part 6 in my series; set a week before the battle at the DoM; Last part set in OotP.
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"Bad Doggie" Haha mela81 June 26 2007, 22:50:21 UTC
It's probably too bad I enjoy the three of them interacting, isn't it? Seeing as how they're not going to get much time together.
*pets Chameleon*
The beginning is good. The middle is good, and the ending is just . . . *gah*
Um, no idea what to name it. I suck at naming things.

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Re: "Bad Doggie" Haha gijane7702 June 26 2007, 22:54:26 UTC
I love the ending...it just punches you right in the stomach. It's too bad, I know. I love writing Remus, Tonks, and Sirius interaction.

Um...this was the last happy piece of the series. Prepare yourself.

Yeah...that's where I am on the name thing.

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molly_coddles June 28 2007, 21:14:41 UTC
I think you ought to name the series, "Mosaic." You've got pieces that fit together to form a picture. And, y'know, it's colourful. ;)
I forgot to mention that I like the cat, lol. You ought to find a picture of him to go along with the fic. Perhaps an icon... ;)

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gijane7702 June 29 2007, 05:25:26 UTC
I love Chameleon! He rocks! There's a pic of a Tonksinese in the link on Part 3. If you want to...a kitty, a wolf, and a chameleon icony would be nice *bats eyelashes*

Ooooohhhhhh...I LIKE that name. *mental note: email mod ion the morning...er...later*

Thanks for reading (finally :P) glad you're enjoying!

Now...picture Remus in a kilt =D

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phe_o July 4 2007, 04:27:08 UTC
A big "Aw!" there for that ending! I like the idea of poor Sirius getting a bit of a reprieve... and I love this part:

“But you’re not English,” Tonks finished, nodding her understanding.

“I hate when you two do that,” Sirius muttered, placing Tonks’ cup in front of her and sitting down.

Love it! :)

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gijane7702 July 4 2007, 13:14:28 UTC
*teehee*

It IS annoying! My Hubbs and I don't do that, but we have friends that are a couple that does.

This day come to haunt both Remus and Tonks in Part 9.

Thanks for continuing to read =)

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gilpin25 July 10 2007, 11:55:43 UTC
It's nice to think that Sirius really did get a day out to enjoy like this, and Chameleon and Padfoot's relationship is a neat nod to the one between Crookshanks and him. Though I think Chameleon might be even cuter.

I liked the way Remus and Tonks were finishing each other's sentences, they seem so happy and content with each other here, that I'm presuming angst may be only a chapter away. Especially as the M-word got mentioned...

Good to hear you've had a break through with eight! And I suppose I should ask if you've got a weakness for a man/wizard with a Scottish accent, like Tonks obviously has?! ;)

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gijane7702 July 11 2007, 17:27:45 UTC
I think Chameleon and Padfoot playing is absolutely adorable. You know Padfoot missed Crookshanks.

Oh yes, next chapter is absolutely horrid (hence the title). I wanted a nice happy chapter, before I began the angst. And, yes, the M word was a indication.

8 is almost done. As for my male weakness, the Hubbs is from Peru, not Scotland, but I find the Scots accents dead sexy, so I HAD to make Remus a Scot ;)

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jncar July 17 2007, 23:14:53 UTC
Such a fun little vignette! I loved the collar and "bad doggie" bit. And the "I'm not English" bit is fun too.

I love Remus-Sirius friendship stories. This is great.

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