Title: Blue Eyes Author: mrstater Format & Word Count: Fic, 1000 words Rating: PG Prompt: "blue eyes" Summary: Remus spends Valentine's Day with a natural redhead, and discovers the merits of poetry as a Defence Against the Dark Arts.
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing the Bill and Remus banter and letting two guys be disappointed about Valentine's Day, and I'm pleased you liked it.
I love the lighthearted conversation between him and Bill and how you made such dismal turn of events (dementor watch on Valentines day instead of dates!!) have an inconsequential effect on either of their spirits. Neither brooding or upset - just teasing each other and taking it in stride.
And then his memory of Tonks... ^_^ The poem is cute and pefectly indicative of her!
And that last line of Remus' has to be the most awesome quote ever. 8)
Thank you very much! Remus strikes me as someone who, most of the time, takes things in stride and makes the best of them. He'd have to to have gotten along like he has. It was fun to let that side play off of a younger man also in love. Glad you liked the memory and the poem and the last line!
Very cute. Moody and Hestia. Who would've thunk? Roving-Eye. Hee! I so want a fic about their date.
Poor Tonks thinking she kept putting her foot in her mouth about the full moon! The poem was very cute and very Tonks, saying it's 'crap.' Very nice job!
Thanks for your lovely words! I'm glad you thought the poem felt like Tonks.
We'll see about some Moody/Hestia fic. I've actually got a crack plot bunny about Remus trying to keep the Advance Guard under control as Mad-Eye peeps at all the ladies' underwear. ;)
I'm so glad you think Bill felt like a Weasley! I'm always worried that character embellishments don't quite blend, so I appreciate that you think he felt like Ron. Very pleased you liked the flashback and the last line, too. I was nervous about it.
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"I shall certainly conjure a Patronus by thinking about you thinking about my eyes to conjure a Patronus."
made perfect sense to me :)
A sweet little ficlet, just perfect for Valentine's Day. Thanks for sharing it!
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I love the lighthearted conversation between him and Bill and how you made such dismal turn of events (dementor watch on Valentines day instead of dates!!) have an inconsequential effect on either of their spirits. Neither brooding or upset - just teasing each other and taking it in stride.
And then his memory of Tonks... ^_^ The poem is cute and pefectly indicative of her!
And that last line of Remus' has to be the most awesome quote ever. 8)
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Poor Tonks thinking she kept putting her foot in her mouth about the full moon! The poem was very cute and very Tonks, saying it's 'crap.' Very nice job!
*singsong voice* I know who you are!
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Thanks for your lovely words! I'm glad you thought the poem felt like Tonks.
We'll see about some Moody/Hestia fic. I've actually got a crack plot bunny about Remus trying to keep the Advance Guard under control as Mad-Eye peeps at all the ladies' underwear. ;)
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Really like the flashback to earlier in the day, a snatched moment between commitments. And that last line from Remus is fabulous.
Lovely fic!
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Thank you very much!
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