The Muggle Way

[merryb87]

TitleThe Muggle Way
Author Merryb87
ratings and warnings I would say PG, and a big warning that this is last minute and unbeta'd. Other than that no scary monsters. Also AU.
Word Count 1,049
Prompts Word: Christmas Lights
Summary It was a Tonks Family tradition to hang lights up the muggle way.
Notes I honestly could not think of anything to

Comments

[moon_reader]

Aww. Very sweet! I love how Remus loses his footing trying to see Tonks...

A few notes:

...as he fumbled with the ladder and setting just right so it won’t fall over...

Tense change?

And anytime you have "..dialouge," she said, a comma goes inside the quotes and the she/he is uncapitalized. Forgive me for being picky!

Also, I think it's LJ's problem with the cuts now - no one's are working. :( We'll just have to edit after New Year's.

And on that note, a very happy New Year to you, too!

[merryb87]

Thank you for the notes, I changed the tense change in the begining. It's okay being picky, I do usually get my stuff edited at least once before posting. But seeing how it was so close I just let it go for this entry.

Thank you for the review.

[train_lindz]

Tsk tsk, Remus. It's very naughty to go snooping for presents :)

Well done!

[carnivalgirl]

Heh heh, I love to see Remus's mischeivous side come out! I thought this was a clever idea, I could just imagine his "Oooh..." expression suddenly become an "ARGH!". Gotta love AU, and the memory of Ted living on in a cute and funny way!

[mrstater]

Hee, such a Marauder! And I think Marauders would get their comeuppance in this fashion, too. Cute fic!

[sspring92]

So much AU goodness this Meta! I'm a happy girl! I must admit, I kept picturing Chevy Chase in "Christmas Vacation" trying to hand the lights and falling off the ladder. Absolutely love Remus disillusioning himself to get a look at his won wife Naked. Classic! Thanks so much for posting!