A New Feeling

[katyscarlett76]

Title: A New Feeling
Author: katyscarlett76
Rating: PG
Warning: Does extreme corniness need a warning?
Prompts: Enchanted snow and "But you know the thing about romance is people only get together right at the very end.” Love Actually
Word Count: 3,506
Summary: Tonks didn’t believe in love but would she recognise it when it presented itself to her? A

Comments

[gppr]

That was very sweet. I liked how you showed things from Tonks' perspective, how things progressed ever so slowly between Remus and her and how it ended where it all started. The line about the spoiled pooch was priceless. :)

[katyscarlett76]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it : )

The line about the spoiled pooch was priceless
That line amused me when I wrote so I'm glad you liked it too. If only Padfoot was more of a pampered pooch...

[wotcher_maera]

"he was obviously a much pampered pooch." ahaha! That's one of the best depictions of Sirius I've ever heard. And I love the way you described Tonks's nervousness. Great work! :)

[katyscarlett76]

Thanks : )

That's one of the best depictions of Sirius I've ever heard.
lol, it is pretty accurate isn't it! To the way he acts anyway if not how he actually is...

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing!

[carnivalgirl]

Corny's not a fair description. I'd say it was sweet! The ending was probably my favourite bit, I really liked that they were grinning when they said it, it was very happy! The beginning was also fun to read; I like your version of Tonks being in denial about loving Remus, it's unusual but definitely imaginable in canon! And Remus was such a gentleman...

[katyscarlett76]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

I must admit there's a lot of me in my version of Tonks and I think I'd be that way in her situation. And I do love Remus the gentleman ;)

Thanks for reviewing!

[sspring92]

I always love it when they meet prior to OOtP. Gives them more time together! I especially liked the line about Remus calling her beautiful making her feel unsettled. I imagine this Tonks being a bit of a tom boy and a workaholic and I think that is exactly the right word to describe how that kind of attention would make her feel!

[katyscarlett76]

I always love it when they meet prior to OOtP. Gives them more time together!
I know! I haven't written it like that myself before, but it does give them time to be happy before all the angst!

I imagine this Tonks being a bit of a tom boy and a workaholic
Yeah, that's pretty much how I see Tonks, with a few of my own traits thrown in (over-identifying much???).

Thanks so much for reviewing!

[darklyromantic]

Aw, I really like this, it's so sweet and fun :) I especially liked the bit about the illegal snow storm in the park, it made me lol. And as for Padfoot, I thought how you connected Remus & Tonks and their separate childhoods through him was really well done. I've often read Sirius helping to bring them together, but never quite like that before...

[katyscarlett76]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it : )

Thanks so much for reviewing.