Fic: Out of Sight
Title: Out of Sight
Author: shimotsuki
Rating & Warnings: PG (mild profanity)
Prompts: chance, and "Love looks not with the eyes but with the mind." - A Midsummer Night's Dream (I, 1, 234)
Word Count: 3658
Summary: As Remus sets out to join Greyback's pack, memories of his friendship with Tonks are his anchor to sanity. But there are certain things that ( Read more... )
Author: shimotsuki
Rating & Warnings: PG (mild profanity)
Prompts: chance, and "Love looks not with the eyes but with the mind." - A Midsummer Night's Dream (I, 1, 234)
Word Count: 3658
Summary: As Remus sets out to join Greyback's pack, memories of his friendship with Tonks are his anchor to sanity. But there are certain things that ( Read more... )
I've been reading your stories for a while, but, being the not so very computery person that I am, I don't have a LiveJournal account, and I didn't think you were able to review if you didn't. Which I have now realized, you can.
So I really do owe you lots of reviews. But you'll get this one, at least, for now. Until you write something more (which I'm hoping will be soon).
Anyway, this was really good, as always. I really love your writing style, and your takes on Tonks' and Remus' personalities. Your version of their relationship has kind of become my official take on them. Because you're just that good.
My favourite part of this chapter was the knitting. I love Tonks for doing that for him, and how she started doing it the moment she found out she wouldn't be able to be there for him after full moon and how she worked through it until the end, despite not being very good at it. For him. Very sweet. And I love that he takes it with him, even now.
I also do really enjoy your development of the pack's life together, especially the conversation between Remus and Matt, who seems pretty decent.
Anyway, this is a great story and you're an amazing author. Just thought I'd let you know that you have one more reader eagerly awaiting your updates!
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I'm glad you liked the part about the knitting and what it shows about how these two feel about each other. It's also good to hear that you liked the pack scenes, since I was a little nervous about working with OCs.
(These days I'm working on a DH installment of the series that I hope to finish in the next week or two...)
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