Winter Dreams

[evrdream33]

Title: Winter Dreams
Author: evrdream33
Rating & Warnings: PG
Prompt: Hogwarts Express

Off with my overcoat, off with my glove
I need no overcoat, I'm burning with love!
My heart's on fire, the flame grows higher
So I will weather the storm!
What do I care how much it may storm?
Oh, I've got my love to keep me warm- "I've Got My Love To Keep Me Warm,"

Comments

[summoner_lenne9]

There is an abundance of dream fics :). Lovely job, though I have a feeling that no 11 year old boy would admit to crying or missing his parents in front of all of his school mates :).

[summoner_lenne9]

That is a very good point, hmm. Though it's also a tad-bit more girly- I mean, I think Remus would remember being eleven and all. But then again *shrugs*

[evrdream33]

Well, Remus is currently in a rather emotional state of mind which can pretty girly if you consider emotional = girly. Lol. I passed off some of the unrealistic elements on the fact that it was a dream. I suppose I could have written that part differently, but then I wouldn't have had that segway into the being brave and strong stuff which I really wanted to touch on being part of Remus' conscience since he got so touchy when Harry called him a coward in DH.

[summoner_lenne9]

No, no. I understand! It was wonderful, I'm sorry for being nit-pickety, heh. It is by definition his dream..... and one that should have come to fruition *sighs*

I'm sorry about being so terribly nit pickety though. It's a really bad habit, heh.

[evrdream33]

No no, it's alright. I welcome the criticism. =) Don't worry, I'm used to doing writing workshops and having a group of like 20 people nitpick my stuff. ^.~

[summoner_lenne9]

Lol. I'd probably die. At a certain point I like criticism, since obviously it's needed, but when you get to 20 people all dissecting your work is when you start wanting to hide in the corner with your arms over your head, so I give you TONS of credit :).

[evrdream33]

Apparently. Lol. Thanks. =) And yeah, I did think about that, but I was also thinking that this is Remus' dream and I think a lot of parents would like to think that their kids wouldn't want to leave them. At least at that young age.