Comments | metamorfic_moon: yes, procrastination is my middle name...

katsie in metamorfic_moon

yes, procrastination is my middle name...

Oct 11, 2006 07:32

Title: Weasley Wizard Wheezes’ Part Time Detective Agency
Author: eclecticmum
Rating & Warnings: K+
Prompts: Thing - Auror Robes, Place - Gladrags Wizardwear, Time - A Day of Loved Ones, Genre - Mystery/Suspense
Word Count: 4270
Summary: “Don’t worry Professor, we’ll help you find out who he is.”
Author’s Notes: Written for the first round of the Fic ( Read more... )

half moon rising fic jumble, mystery/suspense, eclecticmum

Comments 16

sea_thoughts October 11 2006, 19:57:40 UTC

This story was so amusing. Everyone was in character and poor old Remus made a fool of right at the end. I want a sequel where he and Tonks get them back for it. ^^

katsie October 15 2006, 23:53:17 UTC

Hmmm, there is a second jumble just starting....

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

mrstater October 11 2006, 20:14:12 UTC

Such a fun, cute fic! You hooked me right from the start, with Remus watching the little witch who wanted the pink and purple fairy dress and thinking of Tonks. I think even grown Tonks would like that dress. :)

Anyway, your characterization was spot-on, and I particularly loved the twins - I think they own the Wizarding world. And it's a very creative use of a set of fairly straight-forward prompts, so kudos to you for that.

Good work, and hope to see more R/T for you. :)

katsie October 15 2006, 23:08:49 UTC

Thank you!

My first thought was the obvious "Remus and Tonks shop for Auror robes at Gladrags", but that just seemed so very boring! I'm glad that you enjoyed my sideways take on the prompts :)

devonwood October 11 2006, 20:17:24 UTC

Adorable. I love Remus's shame in the end, however I am a little confused as to the 'status' of Remus and Tonks's relationship at this point.

Just what are Fred and George planning to do with Tonks's Auror Robes? XD

katsie October 15 2006, 23:55:13 UTC

Remus is a little confused as to where they stand right now too, but I should have made that clearer. I'll work on that, thanks :)

You don't want to know ;-P

author_by_night October 11 2006, 20:56:20 UTC

This was so funny and cute! :)

I love Fred and George. You have them down pat.

And of course, the ending was perfect. Honestly, Remus really does have self esteen issues.

Favorite lines:

"You look like someone kicked your one and only pet jarvey."

"Haven't gotten to be a Marauder in a long time, have you?"

katsie October 15 2006, 23:56:40 UTC

Thank you! I love the Twins, glad to know I have a good handle on them :)

The jarvey line is my favorite too :)

kileaiya October 12 2006, 23:04:13 UTC

WHOO, the twins! What a fun story!

katsie October 15 2006, 23:57:17 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!