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Dec 04, 2007 22:18

Title: The Christmas Lists
Author: sugarannieRating and Warnings: PG 13, just to be safe (allusions to naughty things in the end ( Read more... )

romance, winter wonderland advent, sugarannie

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pinkhairedauror December 4 2007, 22:00:40 UTC
Ohh dear, so sweet!!! I like the ending a lot (a LOT), but I think my favourite part is:
Thoughtfully, Dora looked into the fire. ”Maybe I should send Father Christmas a thank-you-note instead of a wish list.”
”I’d sign that one…but it doesn’t give me any indications as to what I should get for Christmas.”

Thank you for sharing this - I really enjoyed it a lot!

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sugarannie December 5 2007, 09:39:01 UTC
Thanks for your lovely comment...
It's good to know that the ending (and at least some other parts) work, because I wasn't so sure about it...

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pinkhairedauror December 5 2007, 09:45:51 UTC
Oh the ending MOST definitely does work! LOL those two... well at least in our RP, you can't keep them really away from each other unless something's truly wrong ;)

The rest - it works. It weaves between the romantic and prosaically domestic very smoothly, and I think that does make sense.

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oneandonlysusan December 4 2007, 22:39:57 UTC
This is so cute. Remus' last words are adorable!

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sugarannie December 5 2007, 09:39:34 UTC
Thank you :-)

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sugarannie December 5 2007, 09:40:23 UTC
Thank you.
And I'm sure he'd appreciate the thank-you-card :-)

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merryb87 December 4 2007, 23:57:59 UTC
That was totally sweet and heart warming. I just love this whole idea! Great job.

Dora laughed. “He said he wants to have a sister because Ron says he has one, and so he now wants one, too.”
I asked for a little sister when I was younger, instead I got a brother. I still haven't forgiven Santa...or my parents. ;)

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sugarannie December 5 2007, 09:41:59 UTC
Well, I have one sister, but I always wanted many more siblings (four at the least), and never got them. But the sister I have is lovely, so that's okay :-)

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train_lindz December 5 2007, 04:04:13 UTC
What a happy Christmas fic! It made me all warm and fuzzy inside.

Of course Teddy wants a sister...

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sugarannie December 5 2007, 09:43:08 UTC
Thanks! It's good to hear I make people feel good with my writing.
(About the sister, I have a feeling that with the amount of AUs I write/draw currently, at some point she'll appear there, too :-D)

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