Comments | metamorfic_moon: A Walk In The Woods

katyscarlett76 in metamorfic_moon

A Walk In The Woods

Oct 14, 2007 20:36

Title: A Walk In The Woods
Author: : katyscarlett76
Rating & Warnings: : PG13
Prompts: : Day of Risk, Augurey, Action/Adventure, Picture 4
Word Count: : 3,362
Summary: : A deceptively simple mission for the Order allows hidden feelings to be expressed.
Author’s Notes: : Only my second ever public fic and the first time I’ve ever written Action/Adventure, ( Read more... )

action/adventure, katyscarlett76, all hallows' moon jumble

Comments 20

doctor_banana October 14 2007, 20:30:24 UTC

That's really good, well done :)

katyscarlett76 October 16 2007, 21:42:28 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Oh and I believe we share a love of a certain Mr Tennant, mind if I friend you?

doctor_banana October 16 2007, 21:46:37 UTC

yeah of course!

I love DT loads!

lady_bracknell October 16 2007, 18:52:29 UTC

I really like the way you've created atmosphere here, and really made use of the augarey prompt to lead the fic, in a way, giving it the Irish setting and coming up with the idea of a semi-abandonned town that's really nothing of the sort. I thought that was really inventive, and the Remus/Tonks interplay was very sweet, with Remus' constant wondering and Tonks clearing waiting for him to make a move.

katyscarlett76 October 16 2007, 21:43:56 UTC

I'm really glad that you liked it! I was so worried about writing Action/Adventure, as I never have before and I was worried the plot would be a bit lame! I'm pleased that you think it worked. Thanks!

kriz29 October 17 2007, 05:16:46 UTC

:D :D :D :D I loved it!!!!!! You really are an awesome writer, I hope you do a long fic someday!!! Great job!

katyscarlett76 October 19 2007, 21:49:20 UTC

Aw shucks honey, you say the nicest things! :) Thanks very much *blushes*

Oh and I am planning to...sometime.....

gilpin25 October 17 2007, 14:49:31 UTC

I really enjoyed the setting here - especially the idea of the Muggle and wizard worlds co-existing quite happily in the one street town, except that the Muggles are entirely unaware of it. (Sounds like a interesting Irish village you visited!) It made it easy to imagine the rest and I thought you used the Augurey prompt well too. The interplay between Remus and Tonks wa svery nicely done and thank goodness he did eventually find that Gryffindor courage.

Hope there's many more fics to come if this is only your second. :)

katyscarlett76 October 19 2007, 21:52:45 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I'm please you think I used the Augurey prompt well, when I got it I was like "aaaarrrgh!!!!" and had no idea what to do, so I'm really happy with how it turned out!

Hope there's many more fics to come if this is only your second. :)
I'm sure there will be, now I've started it seems I can't stop!

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katyscarlett76 October 19 2007, 21:54:21 UTC

I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for the lovely comments! I was worried about it, so I'm pleased it turned out ok and that people have liked it!