Comments | merthin: Brigit's Flame February 2011 First entry: Loathing

merthin

Brigit's Flame February 2011 First entry: Loathing

Feb 06, 2011 15:40

"Pow! Bam! Right in the nose ( Read more... )

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katden February 10 2011, 02:05:41 UTC

Hi stranger! I've missed reading you :)

This reminds me of Kung Fu <3 My dad used to watch that show religiously when I was a little kid.

merthin February 11 2011, 11:28:52 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting. You are very kind, as always.

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merthin February 14 2011, 03:58:42 UTC

Thank you very much for reading and commenting. - Yes, it was definitely the first part of a multi-part series. Part two has been posted for this week, though I'm not sure you'll like it any better, assuming you choose to read it. ;-)

As for the lateness, no worries in the slightest. I generally like it anytime someone reads my work. - Thank you again and take care.

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merthin February 16 2011, 23:44:41 UTC

Thank you for even considering it. If you read it, great! If not, absolutely no worries. :-)

leticiae February 12 2011, 02:37:04 UTC

Ohhh. I want to read more of this story!

Although it was short, I felt you did an excellent job of fleshing out the characters. The ambivalence of Tony made him very intriguing. Why didn't he directly face Devin? Wht path will Devin decide?

I hope you choose to pursue this.

Well done!

merthin February 14 2011, 04:00:05 UTC

Thank you for reading and your so-very kind comment. I did indeed choose to continue this story and these characters. The work is posted if you are so inclined. (And no, I don't expect you to read it. ;-)

Thank you again. Take care.