fic or something

[mermaidfangs]

Title: My Foes Exult When I Totter, My Heart Exults in Your Deliverance
Characters: Kara/Laura, Cain, Laura POV
Summary: Kind of an AU take on Pegasus, etc, loosely inspired by Ray-boo's fic and something I wrote but am too embarrassed to post.
Words: 2800
Rating: MA
Warnings: violence, rape/sexual assault

A/N: I want ALL THE REWARDS because I

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[dance_the_dance]

Can I just quote things that made me cry? Because I'll never have words for how PERFECT this is. I'm still crying actually, the silent kind of crying that I kinda don't even notice that I'm doing. (It's a very good thing if a fic can make me cry like that! Just in case you'd want to worry about it or something. :))

When Cain drags Kara inside, she cannot bear to meet her eyes, because Laura is beaten and naked and dirty and not at all the woman Kara loves.
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It makes Laura's chest hurt seeing how easily Kara accepts that she’s unloved, even more so when Laura realises her love for Kara has been so hidden away that Kara never believes it existed in the first place.
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"I just, what if I stay here anyway? On your sofa? I don't even have to go back to your cabin. Just for sleep. You never even have to see me. This can be the last time. I was just thinking it might be easier for me to sleep if I knew you were sort of close by, you know? It’s stupid, I know it’s stupid."
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"Don't you say that," says Kara, kissing Laura's forehead. "You are gorgeous and beautiful and perfect and valuable. I should’ve protected you. I failed you. Not the other way around."

And the ending. SO MUCH HOPE IN THE ENDING. ♥

[mermaidfangs]

Can I just quote things that made me cry?

*huggles* You can do whatever you like, bb. It's always just nice to know you've read, because I feel like you're my brain twin when it comes to certain stuff. Crying is good, isn't it? Sometimes, I watch the Breathe Me ending of Six Feet Under when I need a bit of a cry. I cried a little when I wrote this, certain parts, anyway.

You picked out some of my favourite lines! <3 See, brain twins.