i wrote fic wat

Mar 28, 2013 14:08

wat i wrote a thing last night!

i'm posting it here because i'd like to keep it locked for now. it's mostly kara/laura, with kara/leoben and kara/helena but not in a rightship sort of way. other characters that show up: hmmm, kendra and lee.

warnings for: underage, sexual violence, general unhappiness, references to drug abuse

it's 4700 words. ( Read more... )

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word_vomity March 29 2013, 12:51:12 UTC
There were so many lines that moved me in this piece I couldn't pick just a couple.

Her face flushes rose, and I knot up because I forgot not to be crude, again, and I wonder what’s the politest way to say I want to shove my tongue inside you and feel your come damp on my cheeks.

Every sentence that I think or utter in relation to her starts with, I want.

People are all the same, even the good ones.

because because.

I like to imagine the gods as people with inflated egos. If I say, “I’m invincible,” enough times, it will become true.

I never bother with sorry’s because I know from experience they are meaningless. How do you apologise for complete and utter disaster?

I have tattoos over my scars. I have tattoos everywhere.

We are both of us bundles of quiet need.

I really like what you did with Kara and Lee too. Like a lot.

You write gorgeous words, hon. Just gorgeous. Like Ray said, masterfully understated. It blows me away how you condense such huge emotional bombs into so few words. Wish I could be as raw and brave as you are in your stories.

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mermaidfangs March 30 2013, 09:23:56 UTC
<3 thank you so much, lovely.it's kind of you to say all those things. it's heartening that the writing resonated, as i was afraid it was either over-the-top or too messy or something. you know? so i'm glad it clicked for you. you always say the nicest things and i don't deserve them i don't. <3 *hugs*

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