Comments | merlinxarthur: fic: The Future, And What's In Between

srin in merlinxarthur

fic: The Future, And What's In Between

Mar 11, 2009 14:46

Title: The Future, And What’s In Between
Rating: PG-13
Length: 4300 words
Note: With apologies to the writers of The Devil’s Whore, from whom I have shamelessly stolen a bit of philosophizing.
Summary: Merlin doesn’t see the future. Except when he does.

( The Future, And What’s In Between )

contributor: srin, rating: pg-13, fanfic

Comments 69

analineblue March 11 2009, 19:14:19 UTC

I really, really enjoyed this. :)

Especially this line: “That last one,” he says, a little breathless with the awe of getting something he hadn’t quite known he wanted, “I think that last one would be good.” - I could totally hear Merlin saying that, somehow. *wibbles* XD

Anyway, great job. ^_^ That bit of fluffiness at the end definitely balances out the horrible-ness of all those visions. *__*

srin March 11 2009, 23:52:21 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad Merlin sounded like himself and that the fluffiness worked. :D

nightingale_r3 March 11 2009, 19:21:58 UTC

That was just wonderful :)

srin March 11 2009, 23:52:43 UTC

Thank you!

mossylawn March 11 2009, 20:42:05 UTC

this actually stunned me into silence. in the best of ways.

srin March 11 2009, 23:53:14 UTC

Oh wow, thank you! I'm glad it had such an impact.

drusillas_rain March 11 2009, 20:45:16 UTC

nicely done - great ending!

srin March 11 2009, 23:53:29 UTC

Thank you!

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srin March 11 2009, 23:55:50 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm very glad the tone and their interactions worked. :D