Fic: Secret Art

Jul 03, 2009 17:49

Title: Secret Art
Author: vensre
Rating: G
Warnings/Spoilers: Ø
Wordcount: 431
Summary: Of course Arthur already knows about Merlin's hiding spot.
Notes: If you prefer, read it at AOOO.

Secret Art )

rating: g, contributor: vensre, fanfic

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heartofoshun July 3 2009, 22:25:41 UTC
OMG! That rascal--making dragon clouds (no doubt thinking of Arthur)! Kind of like the scene with dragon over the fire in "The Moment of Truth."

Beautifully written also--perfectly balanced ficlet.

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vensre July 6 2009, 10:17:14 UTC
I left for the weekend just after I posted this story, but not too late to see your comment, although I didn't have time to reply. The words "perfectly balanced ficlet" did a lot to help me past my nervousness over posting in this fandom for the first time, so thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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magog_83 July 3 2009, 22:31:33 UTC
Yay - it's posted :)

On my third read through I still think this is lovely. Just a gorgeous quiet moment between them with spot on characterization and the joy of cloud watching.

And....

"You should look at it now," he said eventually. "It's a perfect replica of your face."

"Lies," Arthur murmured, and didn't even open his eyes.

...that bit makes me giggle every time!

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vensre July 6 2009, 10:20:27 UTC
Thank you. ♥

It's strange to start in a new fandom with a blank slate. I think this was a decent beginning. Thanks again for reading it and encouraging me.

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frostheavens July 3 2009, 22:36:14 UTC
So cute. I loved it!

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vensre July 6 2009, 10:20:45 UTC
Yay, thank you!

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kathyh July 3 2009, 22:47:15 UTC
Lovely. You've captured a small moment between them perfectly :)

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vensre July 6 2009, 10:25:57 UTC
Wow, I love your icon. *__*

Thank you!

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arthur_angel July 3 2009, 23:12:02 UTC
Hey great first post. A short, sweet and believeable scene. I now really want Merlin to turn the clouds into Arthur's face in series two.

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vensre July 6 2009, 05:50:40 UTC
Thanks!

Hahaha! I can just see it~

Arthur: [staring at the clouds suspiciously]
Merlin: [standing around with a very irritating innocent look]
Arthur: [GLARES]

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