An Inconvenient Enchantment

[kathkin]

Title: An Inconvenient Enchantment
Rating: G
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin preslash
Wordcount: ~2000
Summary: Bodyswap. Merlin discovers a spell that would allow one to see from someone else’s point of view. Walk a mile in their shoes, so to speak.
A/N: For merlin_the_elf  2008. Unbeta'd and hastily written at the time. Beware of random tense changes - there were a lot and

Comments

[brunettepet]

That was very cute and I didn't run across any wonky tenses.

This made me laugh out loud: “Yes, you have muscles now,” said Arthur. “Don’t get used to it. We’re going to have to find some way to reverse this.” Arthur's panic at Merlin breaking his body was also hilarious.

[kathkin]

Probably means I did catch them all, then. :) Thank you!

[archaeologist_d]

Very cute. I liked how Merlin really didn't think it through.

[kathkin]

Thank you!

[piratesquared]

Hah, this was lovely :D I like the things they noticed about themselves.

Also, '“I found a spell to reverse this,” said Arthur, holding out the open book. Arthur sat up and took it.' ... Did you mean Merlin not Arthur the first time?? ^^;

[kathkin]

Thank you!

And probably, yes - thanks for pointing that out, will fix!

[piratesquared]

You're welcome, thought it was just me getting confused - Not difficult :D!

[gnrbu]

Very nice story. Thanks for sharing. :)

[kathkin]

Thank you!

[sannaslytherin]

“Stay where you are,” he said. “I like you there, and I’m not done sleeping yet.”

C'mon, it was almost painfully cute! ^_^

[kathkin]

Thank you! :3