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Winter's Trial by janne_d

Jan 03, 2010 21:19

Title: Winter's Trial
Author: janne_d
Wordcount: 8240
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Big thanks to torakowalski for the beta (and the prodding about commas)
Summary: The first snows of winter have fallen and Arthur has Merlin to find and a test to pass out in the cold, or neither of them will make it back to Camelot.

( Winter's Trial )

winter challenge

Comments 70

ex_adarog January 3 2010, 21:54:18 UTC

Mm, ah, very nice!

janne_d January 4 2010, 21:24:16 UTC

Thank you kindly :-)

archaeologist_d January 3 2010, 22:34:59 UTC

That was lovely. I loved that Merlin had to complain about winter and the goddess took it badly. Only him! Great job.

janne_d January 4 2010, 21:25:25 UTC

Only him!

Yes, exactly! Glad you liked it - thank you very much.

laurapetri January 3 2010, 22:50:55 UTC

very cool

janne_d January 4 2010, 21:26:24 UTC

What an appropriate comment :-) Thank you kindly.

emeraldsword January 3 2010, 23:03:34 UTC

ooh, beautiful and thoughtful. Lovely images, nice job.

janne_d January 4 2010, 21:28:35 UTC

beautiful and thoughtful. Lovely images

Oh, that is good to know - I was exercising those descriptive writing muscles there, I'm glad it worked okay! Thank you very much.

rinsbane January 4 2010, 01:03:38 UTC

This is lovely. Winter is quite beautiful with a fine edge to her that I like. And the boys are, of course, darling.

janne_d January 4 2010, 21:32:25 UTC

Winter is quite beautiful with a fine edge to her that I like

That is fantastic - writing Winter was probably the most brain-taxing part of this and I'm really glad you felt she had an edge. Thank you very much!