Changes by Lesserstorm

Jan 15, 2009 18:40



Title: Changes
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normalhumanbein January 15 2009, 19:30:53 UTC
The imagery in this is just gorgeous, especially the first and last, and I love your take on Gwen. Beautiful.

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lesserstorm January 16 2009, 09:56:45 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you

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edenfalling January 16 2009, 01:29:58 UTC
This is really beautiful! I like the way the pieces slowly build up a picture of what happened, and the way it starts and ends with thorns and magic, but the feeling changes from wild despair to patient hope.

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lesserstorm January 16 2009, 09:58:53 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad both the structure and the hope worked for you -- it's slightly darker than my ususal style

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lesserstorm January 17 2009, 22:49:10 UTC
Thank you! I'm having a ridiculous amount of fun with this show. (And I do like Gwen a lot.)

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meritjubet January 17 2009, 15:09:23 UTC
I liked how you showed that Merlin and Morgana's magic was entwined and hinted that they could only be free when Arthur was truly king. Like the play of Arthurian legend as well (Merlin turning into a tree that is). I also really like Gwen's ficlet.

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lesserstorm January 17 2009, 22:49:59 UTC
Thank you! I admit I fear for Morgana in the show - if the message about her visions continues to be "ignore the bad dreams" I can't see it ending well.

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janne_d January 17 2009, 19:09:31 UTC
Fantastic and very powerful. I loved the images of Morgana's white tower and the thorn motif between Morgana and Merlin.

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lesserstorm January 17 2009, 22:50:19 UTC
Thank you! The point where I realised that Morgana wasn't just randomly insane was the point where the story started coming together for me.

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