Gundam Wing: Heero/Duo, times of day: morning

[merith]

title: conjunctive point, author: merith, theme: times of day - morning, rating: PG-13, warning: BL, angst, language, disclaimer: i own neither gundam wing or the gorillaz's song title.
notes: written for the Summer '08 stagesoflove, this is the first of five stories for this theme.

Comments

[jade_sage]

*lies twitching on the floor*

[merith]

*pets you*

i think heero's down there too... give him a hug for me, k?

[whispurr267]

I thought this piece had a lot of depth. You've taken emotions that most of us have felt sometime during a relationship when things have taken a turn for the worse - bewilderment, anger, a sense of loss, and a refortifying of ego to go on - and played it well here. And it stays so in character with them. Duo's expression of his emotions are very yo-yo in nature, it's no wonder Heero is reverting to type.

Looking forward to the next part.

[merith]

oh thank you, carol! :)

next part will be in less than a week. i'm hoping that i don't put it off until next friday.

*snugs*

[fractured_sun]

poor Heero, this is fantastic, you've got them so in character.

[merith]

thanks! and yeah, poor heero... i love hate doing that to him. *pets the poor boy.

[sunhawk16]

*whimper* I'm thinking I will just take these mauled heart-stings and but them in a box until this is over... O.O
Very well done, you evil woman, you! :P

[merith]

oh yeah... cause you never do the angst thing to anyone else. ;)

*snugs*

thanks sunny!

[sunhawk16]

But... but... but... I never! Uh...
...
damnit. ~_~

[merith]

heheh... seems to me, i'd just read something of yours that had me bawling.

and it does get better... eventually.

[merula31]

Lovely as always- you do such a good job with the boys- but oh, I hope Duo gets his head on the right way soon...

[merith]

not sure about soon, but he will buy a vowel and get a clue. :)

thank you so much meru!! ♥