Comments | merith: FIC: The Beach House 2/5

merith

FIC: The Beach House 2/5 - Wufei/Relena

Feb 11, 2008 16:08

title: the beach house 2/5, pairing: wufei/relena, heero/duo (implied), warnings: some language, het, (hinted) BL, a small touch of angst, sap (of course). word count: 1541
notes: originally started for the het_challenge, but failed miserable at getting it done, i dedicate this story to haraamis. ♥

( She looked up at him, frowning. 'Don’t patronize me, Wufei, please.' From her case, she pulled free a fabric covered elastic, and wound her hair up around it, balling it at the nape of her neck. 'I don’t have time for the distraction.' )

Comments 11

ralphiere February 11 2008, 23:39:53 UTC

*claps and cheers* I am loving this!! The characterization is right on point, and OMG Wufei *wibbles* he's so freakin' sweet in his own way! I can't wait to see more!! ^___^

merith February 12 2008, 04:47:29 UTC

hee! isn't he just a marshmallow? so gooey-soft --well, when he isn't being all hard and stiff, that is. ;)

i'm so happy you're liking it! i am getting a kick out of writing it, and now need to finish. ;)

sunhawk16 February 12 2008, 00:22:24 UTC

Oh, that was great! I like how it rather hits Wufei there at the end, and there's a sense that he's not sure how he feels about what he just realized. ^^;

merith February 12 2008, 04:48:22 UTC

it sort of snuck up on him, poor baby.

*snugs* thanks for reading, sunny. :)

meritjubet February 12 2008, 00:42:41 UTC

This was so lovely! As well as leaving me on the edge of my seat, waiting to see if they could do it, the emotional punch was great. Wufei's beginning to see Relena for all that she is and she with Wufei :)

merith February 12 2008, 04:49:23 UTC

yeah... he has that little inkling, and is tasting the flavor of what it could be. ;)

hee!! thanks merit! i'm glad you're liking the story! :)

lil_1337 February 12 2008, 06:05:49 UTC

*Grins* Someone's got a crush...

merith February 12 2008, 15:29:18 UTC

or the inkling of one. :) just realizing that maybe he has more of those 'weak' feelings than he thought.

*snugs* thanks for reading lil!

sharona1x2 February 12 2008, 09:12:21 UTC

Yay, you've got one of them figuring it out! Who would have thought Wufei would realize his feelings first? Now to work on Relena. ^_~

merith February 12 2008, 15:32:51 UTC

well, he hasn't quite realized his feelings yet... just has an idea that there's something stirring there he's never had before.

and relena's just really focused at the moment. she'll be there when the time is right. :)

*snugs* thanks for reading sharon.