Brick by Boring Brick [3/6]

Nov 20, 2010 20:14

Title: Brick by Boring Brick
Author: meridianslair
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key, past!Jinki/Key
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Key is a fashion designer who fell in love with Jonghyun after a one night stand that turned into more.
A/N: Character death, be warned!
Series of oneshots based on paramore songs. Collab between sodonii_chan and I 8)

FencesWe Are Broken

She lives in a fairy tale )

!fanfic

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random_kid_97 November 21 2010, 03:39:48 UTC
OMIGOD OMIGOD.

MAKING POPCORN TO EAT WHILE READING THIS, BRB.

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random_kid_97 November 21 2010, 03:55:05 UTC
Iunno what to say.

THAT WAS REALLY GOOD. IM CRYING BECAUSE THAT GOT TO ME, WHICH IS A GOOD THING, CUZ LIKE, YOU WANT YOUR READERS TO FEEL ALL EMOTIONAL IN THESE SORT OF CASES.

WHY YOU GOTTA BE SO GOOD? TT_TT

What are you, like, smut queen now or something? Two nights in a row... Jeesh. <33

I didn't notice any mistakes and it was easy to follow, XD

I dunno know what you're talking about when you say us Jongkey fans will hate it? Are there really fans like that? Like, ones who leave a negitive comment on a death fic because their bias dies? O.o That would be rude. Even if Taemin died in you last fic, I wouldn't have been all,

"WHYD YOU KILL TAEMIN, YOU BITCH? DIE!" XD

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meridianslair November 21 2010, 04:12:31 UTC
YOU SAID U WANTED ANGST, SO THERE TT-TT NOW U GET AGNST THAT ALMOST MAKES U CRY LOL~ I WANT MY READERS TO FEEL SAD BUT NOT LIKE.. REALLY REALLY UPSET!

D8< IM NOT GOOD. hush ur lips woman! *duct tapes your mouth* 83 ahh that's better~ lol

no im not the smut queen... im just lonelyyy! hah. dont expect anything tomorrow night! im already wondering how the hell i did it 2 nights in a row o-o

thats good then >.< i really didnt feel like reading it over and then changing shit again XD

you never know o-o either they'll hate it and bash me or they wont comment and secretly tell their friends how bad it is 83 if i would have killed Taemin in my last fic i would have yelled at myself BC FAERIE TAEMIN CANT DIE, IT CANT HAPPEN! but this fic its suppose to happen so.. bc the song just ends kinda like that as well...

thanks for commenting bb XD

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random_kid_97 November 21 2010, 04:27:10 UTC
IT WAS A GOOD CRY. NOT A BAD CRY. <333 DONT BE UPSET. ITS GOOD WHEN YOU GET YOUR READERS TO CTY. THATS WHAT TRAGEDY IS FOR. I WANTED ANGST, AND YOU SURE AS HELL GAVE IT TO ME. <3333

I think I like angst more than one should.... O_o

Lol. Smut Queen. Hah.

I read a Naruto fic that had some form of smut in every freekin chapter.

Some writers are so horny... Geez. Sometimes, smut is just unesessary.... Like if you have it in every damn chapter of a 20 chapter long fic. XD

Lol.

You're lonely? Awwwwww. Poor you. *hugs*

Not that I should talk. I've never had a BF in my life. XD Nopenope. But I'm fine like that for now. Come grade nine... I'll be lonely for sure, but I'm fine for now. Not really, my crush has a girlfriend... whos also one of my best friends... So yeah. It sucks, but thats life. XD

PEOPLE WOULDNT BASH YOU. <33333333

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melalocket November 21 2010, 10:53:01 UTC
OMOOOO !!!
its such a graet fic ,, i love this >.<
key T______T poor thing... hiks..
its such an emotional fic T______T

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meridianslair November 21 2010, 17:36:16 UTC
gahh i know, i felt so bad writing it too >.<
it was going to be even worse and Jonghyun was going to abuse Key and then Key killed Jjong and them himself but 8| thats even worse than this LOL

glad you liked it despite the angst, thanks for the comment! 8)

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melalocket November 23 2010, 20:48:46 UTC
sure i love this :DD
its great khekekekeke..

you are welcome >.<

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mad_nux November 21 2010, 13:40:40 UTC
Omggg crying right now

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meridianslair November 21 2010, 17:38:49 UTC
D8 im sorry i made it so angsty

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lunathunderhead November 21 2010, 23:01:53 UTC
Jjong...died.

Key...also died.

ARE YOU TRYING TO MAKE ME CRY, WOMAN?! TT____TT Beautiful way of showing it, though...I like how you said the blood spattered the walls (I'm a morbid person, LOL). It was soooo depressing. I am so excited for the next chapter :D

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meridianslair November 21 2010, 23:15:14 UTC
im sorry D8 lol idk i mean wouldnt there be splatters on the wall if he shot himself?

well its not that there's going to be another "chapter" its just 6 oneshots. sodonii_chan is going 3 and im doing 3 8)

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jockyasian2 November 23 2010, 03:16:35 UTC
This was really good. I love it.

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meridianslair November 23 2010, 03:17:25 UTC
glad you liked it ^.^

thanks for the comment~

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