The College Years 12/?

[mericat_92]

Hey everyone,

Yes, I'm a little late. School is in full swing...and this whole house thing has me ready to pull my hair out! I haven't gotten much writing done and this is my last back up chapter. I am half way thru 13 though, so hopefully there won't be a delay.

Anyway, here is chapter 12. I hope you enjoy it!

Meredeth

Comments

[dean1955]

Wow, so much happened in this chapter it is difficult to pick out all the highlights.

Lets first start with Dane and Michael. I do not know who I feel more sorry for, Dane who has deluded himself about their possible relationship, or Michael who thinks ending his marriage and moving in with his new lover is going to be easy. I do not know if there is a happy ending for these two.

My heart really goes out to Jason. You are doing a smashing job portraying his pain and road to recovery. I think have Chris and Zander for support and then going to the meeting are great starts. One has to wonder if Aiden will be another addition.

Ok, I left the best for last. Matt and David. I do not think it is a surprise, but I love this storyline. I love the time the spend together, Matt's uncertainty about their relationship, and David's desire to be with him. It will be interesting to see how their weekend trip to Florida turns out. I have a feeling Matt is going to have even more conflicted feelings after it is over. Now he will get to see David's wealth in all its glory.

Thank you for giving us another wonderful and involving chapter. You have really set the stage for some great plot turns. I am looking forward to being a watcher for all of them.

Meredeth, I am still holding you in my thoughts. I posted a little happy birthday note on my journal page, but I do not know if you saw it. You share the date with my father. He passed away a few years ago. He would love to know there was another Aquarius out there

Stay safe,
Veronica

[mericat_92]

Hi Veronica,

First of all, I'm sorry you lost your father. Both of my parents are still alive, but I lost my grandmother who raised me over ten years ago and I still miss her every day. I did get your birthday note, and I thank you.

Now, as for the story. I'm glad you are still enjoying it. I'm having so much fun with all the characters, I never know where to go next. I will say that I was almost finished with chapter 13 when I posted 12 and then I realized that quite a few people, like yourself, were anxious to read about the Florida trip. I had planned on passing over it. Because of that, I finished where I was taking 13 and then wrote a chapter 12.5. It's finished and waiting for editing and it is strictly about Matt and David in Florida. Anyone who is interested can have a look at what happened during their trip and meet David's family, and those who don't care can skip it. I will post it as soon as I can, but Lois is on a trip so it probably won't go up for another week or so.

Thank you so much for always taking the time to give feedback. It is always appreciated.

Meredeth