I loved getting a glimpse of Brian, Justin, Matt and David together. I think it is a true testament of their friendship, that Brian and Justin went over to stay with them. Brian knew something was going on, but who knew it would be David is wealthy.
I would be lying if I did not say that I enjoy the awkwardness and sexual tension between Matt and David. I know Matt is finding his way, and trying to figure out what he wants, but I like the fact that David is pushing his buttons. The kitchen scene alone was worth the price of admission. I just hope that David does not push too hard and cause Matt to retreat into a shell.
I wonder if being around Brian and Justin, influenced David calling Matt, Babe. It will be interesting to see how they do around Matt's parents.
The tidbits about Sophia were cute. It is obvious she has made a big impact on both Brian and Justin. Just the thought of the three of them on vacation makes me smile. I hope that is a chapter/trip we get to see.
Thanks for posting a new chapter and for thinking about your readers. We are sure thinking about you!
Wow, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Detailed feedback always makes me smile. It's funny, but I really enjoy my characters. It's so much fun writing them that I don't ever want to say goodbye to them, although realistically one day I will have to. Chapter 9 is almost finished and I'm going to slowly be introducing a new character. You'll only get a tidbit in 9, but hopefully 10 will show more of him.
Thanks for taking the time to tell me your thoughts. I really appreciate it.
I would be lying if I did not say that I enjoy the awkwardness and sexual tension between Matt and David. I know Matt is finding his way, and trying to figure out what he wants, but I like the fact that David is pushing his buttons. The kitchen scene alone was worth the price of admission. I just hope that David does not push too hard and cause Matt to retreat into a shell.
I wonder if being around Brian and Justin, influenced David calling Matt, Babe. It will be interesting to see how they do around Matt's parents.
The tidbits about Sophia were cute. It is obvious she has made a big impact on both Brian and Justin. Just the thought of the three of them on vacation makes me smile. I hope that is a chapter/trip we get to see.
Thanks for posting a new chapter and for thinking about your readers. We are sure thinking about you!
Stay safe!
Veronica
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Wow, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Detailed feedback always makes me smile. It's funny, but I really enjoy my characters. It's so much fun writing them that I don't ever want to say goodbye to them, although realistically one day I will have to. Chapter 9 is almost finished and I'm going to slowly be introducing a new character. You'll only get a tidbit in 9, but hopefully 10 will show more of him.
Thanks for taking the time to tell me your thoughts. I really appreciate it.
Meredeth
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