Now That You're Here chapter 35

Dec 18, 2010 22:05

 As promised, here's the next chapter. I thought it was going to be the holiday chapter...but apparently not. I'm just too long winded. At this rate, this story is going to go beyond the 100 chapter mark...lol. I hope you enjoy it...And I hope you all have a safe and wonderful holiday...whatever it is that you're celebrating.

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vision_m December 19 2010, 04:50:00 UTC
Well thinks are moving in the right direction, I figured Chris had deeper issues that he thought had gone away but pain like that never truly goes away just buried away until something forces it to come to the forefront again. Love the talk between Zan and Chris at least the are talking again and are really trying to work things out and the first step was really seeing what's going on with Chris.

Amazing chapter

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mericat_92 December 19 2010, 05:23:03 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Chris has some very deep issues...deep enough to cause him to hurt the man that he loves. There's going to be a lot of talking between them in the future. I just hope they can find a way to work things out and save their relationship. :-)

Thanks!

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mdlaw December 19 2010, 05:13:37 UTC
Well okay, that's a start. I guess you may have a plan after all. m ;D

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mericat_92 December 19 2010, 05:25:00 UTC
I always have a plan...it just changes when I least expect it...lol. Glad you enjoyed it. :-)

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meta1960 December 20 2010, 17:47:01 UTC
Well they started to work things out. I'm glad that some thing are out in the open and that Brian and Justin can help. I hope that they will have a good Thanksgiving and working something toward Christmas.

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mericat_92 January 1 2011, 16:48:48 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanksgiving will be good for them...I think. :-)

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on_the_ground December 24 2010, 03:12:23 UTC
Sorry, it's beena busy week and didn't read anything until today. Love this because the way you write these characters couldn't feel more real. You can see how they care deeply about each other despite their problems and how this is affecting everybody. It's good that these two are finally talking to each other and can't wait to see how their kinda break up develops.

Loved the dialogues and having Jason back.. thanks!! ;)

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mericat_92 January 1 2011, 16:50:47 UTC
Thanks...I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I have to say that I'm really having fun writing this story. I'm enjoying the secondary characters almost as much as Brian and Justin. And I'm really having fun with Jason. We're going to hear a lot more from him in the future. :-)

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esmaro December 27 2010, 14:21:16 UTC
I am glad that they start to work things out. Thanks for another great chapter.

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mericat_92 January 1 2011, 16:51:09 UTC
Thanks...glad you're still enjoying the story. :-)

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