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Fic: Staring

Dec 10, 2006 22:56

Title: Staring

Author: hazel170

Pairing: Meredith/Addison

Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: Shondra owns them I’m just messing with them a little.

Summery: Addison can’t seem to keep her eyes off of Meredith Grey. (AU-Meredith does not take Derek back after the break)

Meredith Grey was not the most beautiful intern, that was Izzie Stevens. She wasn’t the ( Read more... )

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hazel170 December 11 2006, 04:23:25 UTC

I really didn't mean for it to be creepy. I just wanted Addison to start noticing Meredith under a pretence. oh well, better luck next time I hope.

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hazel170 December 11 2006, 04:36:41 UTC

Thanks anyway, concrit is love.

fierce_desea December 11 2006, 04:32:28 UTC

Cute fic!! I could see most of it happening. I liked it!

hazel170 December 11 2006, 04:37:12 UTC

Thanks so much! Glad you like it.

jodete December 11 2006, 04:32:50 UTC

Love it! :)

leformat December 11 2006, 08:32:47 UTC

yay you are writing a Grey's fic! I read your M/V fic, and I really like that one a lot, and this one is good too! So keep it up, and post soon. :)

hostile_driver December 12 2006, 01:47:49 UTC

Nice start, good development, and I think you've got Addison's temperament well in mind.

The part I liked the best, though, was this one line of dialogue:
“Because you were staring at me,” said Meredith now looking at her hands in her lap, “you just keep staring at me.”

That sounds exactly like what one of the show writer's would put in - that clean repetition, and I could hear Meredith's voice. Perfect catch.

hazel170 December 12 2006, 01:51:49 UTC

Thank you thank you thank you. I was really trying to keep Meredith's voice as true as possible. The one of the things I love about Grey's Anatomy is the way they use repetition in the dialouge. Everytime a phrase is repeated it gives it a different meaning.